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marsaray
12-06-2004, 10:17 AM
Here is my latest movie. It has been awhile since i made the hateful flash about kerry here is the link to my site. Click on starheads. By the way it isnt spyware if you dont belieave me ask my father kcwolfman.

marsaray
12-06-2004, 10:17 AM
www.rondoindustries.741.com/starwars.html

marsaray
12-06-2004, 03:17 PM
So anyone like it?

John_Wayne
12-06-2004, 03:23 PM
So anyone like it? :spock:

After watching that, I'm 5 minutes older and don't have anything to show for it. :mad:

marsaray
12-06-2004, 03:25 PM
:spock:

I'm 5 minutes older and don't have anything to show for it. :mad:
Well I appericiate the love you hast cast down upon me. I shall review my mistakes and if you have any suggestions please contact me via this board.

Taco John
12-06-2004, 03:26 PM
Sorry kid... That was a rough one to make it through. Keep at it though. Each time you do, you'll learn something new for the next one.

John_Wayne
12-06-2004, 03:28 PM
Well I appericiate the love you hast cast down upon me. I shall review my mistakes and if you have any suggestions please contact me via this board. Add nudity.

JazzzLovr
12-06-2004, 03:30 PM
:spock:

I'm 5 minutes older and don't have anything to show for it. :mad:

Yeah, so what's new? Are you going to watch the kid's movie or not?

marsaray
12-06-2004, 03:32 PM
Yeah thanks I think ill try again.

SNR
12-06-2004, 03:35 PM
It sucks. So do you.

Cochise
12-06-2004, 03:36 PM
There were some funny spots in there, good work. It looks like you put a lot of time into it. How long did it take? What tools are you using?

marsaray
12-06-2004, 03:36 PM
It sucks. So do you.
I may suck but you do it for longer periods of time and you enjoy it.

marsaray
12-06-2004, 03:38 PM
There were some funny spots in there, good work. It looks like you put a lot of time into it. How long did it take? What tools are you using?
I am useing flash it took about 6 hours straight. It was a school project for a book I read starwars a new hope by:george lucas.

SNR
12-06-2004, 03:40 PM
I may suck but you do it for longer periods of time and you enjoy it.What are you doing posting homemade Star Wars videos on a Rich Scanlon forum?

Raiderhader
12-06-2004, 03:42 PM
Add nudity.


Ignore him.


Let me ask this, do you have a script written out, or do you just improv the whole thing as you are going through it? And if you do have a script, do you alter much from it, or stick to what is written?

Pants
12-06-2004, 03:43 PM
What are you doing posting homemade Star Wars videos on a Rich Scanlon forum?

LMAO, rep.

BTW, the voices are really good. Who voiced the short? And yeah, you'll eventually get better, this one wasn't so hot, but not bad for a 2nd try.

Cochise
12-06-2004, 03:44 PM
I am useing flash it took about 6 hours straight. It was a school project for a book I read starwars a new hope by:george lucas.

How did you create the images? What did you draw them with?

I work in IT, but I don't know anything about this kind of stuff.

Pants
12-06-2004, 03:45 PM
How did you create the images? What did you draw them with?

I work in IT, but I don't know anything about this kind of stuff.

Flash, it's not that hard, but takes a SHITLOAD of time.

http://www.macromedia.com/software/

Saulbadguy
12-06-2004, 03:51 PM
I'm contacting George Lucas.

He will either:

A) Sue you.
B) Package your movie in to a 3 disc DVD collection and sell it for 69.99 with a limited edition C3P0 Action figure.

Saulbadguy
12-06-2004, 03:53 PM
Oh, and creating a flash movie for a report on a book based on a movie is the ultimate cop out.

Good work. I did a book report on Jurassic Park many a year ago. It did not fair well.

Dr. Facebook Fever
12-06-2004, 03:55 PM
I gotta know what it's about before I watch. I'm not getting any younger here. Time is precious.

ENDelt260
12-06-2004, 04:06 PM
I'm contacting George Lucas.

He will either:

A) Sue you.
B) Package your movie in to a 3 disc DVD collection and sell it for 69.99 with a limited edition C3P0 Action figure.
Probably both.

DeepSouth
12-06-2004, 05:25 PM
Ignore him.


Let me ask this, do you have a script written out, or do you just improv the whole thing as you are going through it? And if you do have a script, do you alter much from it, or stick to what is written?
I wouldn't mind seeing Princess Leia naked.

Raiderhader
12-06-2004, 06:18 PM
I wouldn't mind seeing Princess Leia naked.


Well, yeah, but GF was just being a dumbass. You also have to take into consideration the boy's father. He is the mean bastard who fought so hard against girly jpegs on the Planet. Do you really think he is going to approve of his son turning his movie into toon porn? I was just saving the kid some work. :)

Jenson71
12-06-2004, 06:59 PM
Well...ah, damn. Well, it has a lot of heart, and that's what matters most of all.

Saulbadguy
12-06-2004, 06:59 PM
I was waiting for the film critic to chime in.

4th and Long
12-06-2004, 07:08 PM
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:cuss:

marsaray
12-06-2004, 07:24 PM
Ignore him.


Let me ask this, do you have a script written out, or do you just improv the whole thing as you are going through it? And if you do have a script, do you alter much from it, or stick to what is written?
Well there was a script but sadly it was lost. I started out using some of the ideas from it then i kinda just made stuff up as i went along. Like the part where luke says he flushed the toilet i just had a sudden idea to do that.

marsaray
12-06-2004, 07:25 PM
LMAO, rep.

BTW, the voices are really good. Who voiced the short? And yeah, you'll eventually get better, this one wasn't so hot, but not bad for a 2nd try.
I did the voices myself. Yeah im a dude so i had to go all falseeto. That was scary.

marsaray
12-06-2004, 07:26 PM
How did you create the images? What did you draw them with?

I work in IT, but I don't know anything about this kind of stuff.
If you bitmap the pictures it is way easier. Thats how i did it.

Thig Lyfe
12-06-2004, 07:28 PM
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:cuss:

You made 40 megs of that?

Jenson71
12-06-2004, 07:31 PM
Well there was a script but sadly it was lost. I started out using some of the ideas from it then i kinda just made stuff up as i went along. Like the part where luke says he flushed the toilet i just had a sudden idea to do that.

That reminds me of a short documentary I was watching on Peter O'Toole one night. He was talking about Lawrence, specifically when Lawrence first gets on the traditional Arabic robes. Lean's shooting and he tells him to do something other than look at his shadow. So, the ever thoughtful O'Toole remembers that one of his props is a shiny dagger, and he takes it out and looks at his reflection. Behind the camera, Lean says "Clever, boy. Very clever."

Unfortunately, I can't quite say the same for you, but keep trying... :)

Raiderhader
12-06-2004, 07:33 PM
Well there was a script but sadly it was lost. I started out using some of the ideas from it then i kinda just made stuff up as i went along. Like the part where luke says he flushed the toilet i just had a sudden idea to do that.


Well, the toilet bit was good, and the part where your voice starts cracking up was funny. But I would highly reccomend making a script and sticking to it. I would not venture off of the reservation too far (don't do a lot of ad libbing). As time goes on you'll have a better feel for doing that sort of thing, but stick to the script early on. The paramiters that gives you will help a lot.

That's my bit of constructive criticism anyway.

Pants
12-06-2004, 07:35 PM
You made 40 megs of that?

No, people just watched it enough on that website to exceed the daily band width.

Thig Lyfe
12-06-2004, 07:36 PM
Well, the toilet bit was good, and the part where your voice starts cracking up was funny. But I would highly reccomend making a script and sticking to it. I would not venture off of the reservation too far (don't do a lot of ad libbing). As time goes on you'll have a better feel for doing that sort of thing, but stick to the script early on. The paramiters that gives you will help a lot.

That's my bit of constructive criticism anyway.

Improv is good. If you know how to do it.

Raiderhader
12-06-2004, 07:42 PM
Improv is good. If you know how to do it.


Oh I agree, I love and respect quality improv. And I am not saying he should not do that. I am merely saying don't do a lot of it in the beggining, and make sure you have your paramiters (script) in place when you do. With out that script you will quite possibly wander off into who knows what straying so far from the story that the audience is left scratching their heads.

And that is really a possibility if you are doing the whole thing improv.

Thig Lyfe
12-06-2004, 07:46 PM
Oh I agree, I love and respect quality improv. And I am not saying he should not do that. I am merely saying don't do a lot of it in the beggining, and make sure you have your paramiters (script) in place when you do. With out that script you will quite possibly wander off into who knows what straying so far from the story that the audience is left scratching their heads.

And that is really a possibility if you are doing the whole thing improv.

If you improv, you should do what Larry David does with Curb Your Enthusiasm or what Christopher Guest does with his movies. Make an outline and follow that. Have a plot. But you can then ad-lib the dialogue while staying within the plot and not getting anybody confused.

marsaray
12-06-2004, 07:50 PM
If you improv, you should do what Larry David does with Curb Your Enthusiasm or what Christopher Guest does with his movies. Make an outline and follow that. Have a plot. But you can then ad-lib the dialogue while staying within the plot and not getting anybody confused.
This is funny though. You see me and my sister(russes daughter) sat in front of the computer. I was going to have people moving and have hands but than i was like wait... I just bitmapped the peoples faces and did voices i was also originally not going to do voices either. I dont deserve all the credit my sister had ideas about .315 of the movie whilst i did the rest. And that is why her name is in the credits. For those who didn't get to see it today watch it tomorrow.

Jenson71
12-06-2004, 08:00 PM
Improv was always a fun thing in speech class. I always had everyone dying from laughter.

Of course, I found out a couple years after it was because someone had drawn black nipples on my back.

marsaray
12-06-2004, 08:02 PM
Improv was always a fun thing in speech class. I always had everyone dying from laughter.

Of course, I found out a couple years after it was because someone had drawn black nipples on my back.
Ahhh... I remeber my first pair of black nipples. Good times. They were called tim and john after the bible heros of course.

Jenson71
12-06-2004, 08:16 PM
Ahhh... I remeber my first pair of black nipples. Good times. They were called tim and john after the bible heros of course.

Dude, I was kidding. But, whatever.

Thig Lyfe
12-06-2004, 08:17 PM
Dude, I was kidding. But, whatever.

Stop crushing his dreams.

Raiderhader
12-06-2004, 08:29 PM
Ahhh... I remeber my first pair of black nipples. Good times. They were called tim and john after the bible heros of course.


Uh, Russ......

John_Wayne
12-08-2004, 12:53 PM
Well, yeah, but GF was just being a dumbass. You also have to take into consideration the boy's father. He is the mean bastard who fought so hard against girly jpegs on the Planet. Do you really think he is going to approve of his son turning his movie into toon porn? I was just saving the kid some work. :) Hey, raiderhader, it was just a silly joke. I think everyone knew that except you. Come on, man. Get with it. :p

Saulbadguy
12-08-2004, 01:21 PM
Hey, raiderhader, it was just a silly joke. I think everyone knew that except you. Come on, man. Get with it. :p
Nope. You are the only one who found it funny. I promise.