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Count Zarth
07-27-2006, 12:06 PM
ME!!!

My debut article was published this morning.

http://www.realfootball365.com/nfl/articles/2006/07/brodie-croyle-chiefs270706.html

/end attention whoring

Woodrow Call
07-27-2006, 12:07 PM
Congrats sir

Donger
07-27-2006, 12:09 PM
"They have a new head coach that appears to be steering the franchise in the right direction."

"That" appears?

Ultra Peanut
07-27-2006, 12:09 PM
goCE

Count Zarth
07-27-2006, 12:11 PM
"They have a new head coach that appears to be steering the franchise in the right direction."

"That" appears?

Looks like they need an editor, too...

KingPriest2
07-27-2006, 12:12 PM
Do you have firsthand knowledge that it is a concern?

Moooo
07-27-2006, 12:14 PM
"They have a new head coach that appears to be steering the franchise in the right direction."

"That" appears?

Although usually I am anti-grammar police, if you're actually publishing work, whether internet-based or not, perhaps you should have someone edit it for you.

Other than that, kudos!

Moooo

Donger
07-27-2006, 12:14 PM
Looks like they need an editor, too...

Nice article, BTW.

the Talking Can
07-27-2006, 12:14 PM
congrats....

the Talking Can
07-27-2006, 12:15 PM
nice pop-ups...old school

HemiEd
07-27-2006, 12:16 PM
Nice job for the most part. However, I do not remember Grbac being run out of town. It was quite different, Chiefs were counting on him and he signed with Baltimore.

Rain Man
07-27-2006, 12:17 PM
Wait a minute. That was lifted straight from "The Old Man and the Sea."

Count Zarth
07-27-2006, 12:19 PM
Wait a minute. That was lifted straight from "The Old Man and the Sea."

My next piece is plagiarised from "War and Peace."

Count Zarth
07-27-2006, 12:20 PM
Although usually I am anti-grammar police, if you're actually publishing work, whether internet-based or not, perhaps you should have someone edit it for you.

Other than that, kudos!

Moooo

They have an editor. I guess he missed that error.

Cochise
07-27-2006, 12:20 PM
How are you going to type for that other site with Nick Athan's crank still embedded in your mouf?

Halfcan
07-27-2006, 12:21 PM
Nice one-you might be the next Bob Gretz!

Count Zarth
07-27-2006, 12:23 PM
How are you going to type for that other site with Nick Athan's crank still embedded in your mouf?

It's only once a week. I'm sure I can find some time somewhere during my busy fellatio schedule.

the Talking Can
07-27-2006, 12:24 PM
Nice one-you might be the next Bob Gretz!

if he becomes fluent with the ubiquitous use of the word "ubiquity" he can be that fairy English fellow who writes for the Chiefs...Ubiquitous Dawes.....

Pitt Gorilla
07-27-2006, 12:28 PM
"They have a new head coach that appears to be steering the franchise in the right direction."

"That" appears?I'm more concerned with the statement. I haven't seen enough of Herm in KC to have any clue about his "steering." I like the guy a lot, but what has he done?

Count Zarth
07-27-2006, 12:30 PM
I've been pretty impressed with the off-season thus far. I think he's doing a good job. That's all I meant to say.

Pitt Gorilla
07-27-2006, 12:31 PM
I've been pretty impressed with the off-season thus far. I think he's doing a good job. That's all I meant to say.I think that's fine, and I believe you; I have no idea what he's done in terms of being a head coach.

The Bad Guy
07-27-2006, 12:40 PM
Since I can't see the first few posts, what was Go's typo?

Count Zarth
07-27-2006, 12:43 PM
Since I can't see the first few posts, what was Go's typo?

"They have a new head coach that appears to be steering the franchise in the right direction."

"That" appears?

dirk digler
07-27-2006, 12:43 PM
Nice article gochiefs and congrats.

The Bad Guy
07-27-2006, 12:44 PM
What is the problem with that?

Keep in mind, my brain is fried from interviewing and sending out resumes the last week so I'm not on the top of my grammar game.

Moooo
07-27-2006, 12:47 PM
What is the problem with that?

Keep in mind, my brain is fried from interviewing and sending out resumes the last week so I'm not on the top of my grammar game.

A head coach is not a "that," he is a "who."

Moooo

The Bad Guy
07-27-2006, 12:49 PM
A head coach is not a "that," he is a "who."

Moooo

And that's why I'm not applying for editor jobs.

StcChief
07-27-2006, 12:52 PM
Nice short/sweet.

Printers in the equation?

tk13
07-27-2006, 12:53 PM
A head coach is not a "that," he is a "who."

Moooo
Herm's a thin, oddly shaped creature that is terrorized by the Grinch?

Halfcan
07-27-2006, 12:56 PM
You should have checked with me-I would have gave you the Hali signing scoop for your article.

Count Zarth
07-27-2006, 12:56 PM
That would have been a boring article.

Moooo
07-27-2006, 12:57 PM
Herm's a thin, oddly shaped creature that is terrorized by the Grinch?

Yes...

Moooo

Rain Man
07-27-2006, 01:01 PM
A head coach is not a "that," he is a "who."

Moooo

Exception: Shanahan is a 'that'.

Donger
07-27-2006, 01:04 PM
Exception: Shanahan is a 'that'.

ROFL

One just knew that was coming.

CupidStunt
07-27-2006, 02:14 PM
Where can I find the "original Chiefs content" as stated in the footnote?

jspchief
07-27-2006, 02:17 PM
Congrats JBret.

Count Zarth
08-03-2006, 11:57 AM
This week's article is up!

http://www.realfootball365.com/nfl/articles/2006/08/kansascity-chiefs-receivers030806.html

Cochise
08-03-2006, 12:14 PM
Bumping your own spam, quality stuff.

Rudy lost the toss
08-03-2006, 01:48 PM
C.E. Wendler? how long did it take to come up with that?

Count Zarth
08-03-2006, 01:50 PM
That's my real name.

Count Zarth
08-10-2006, 05:21 PM
Another article...

http://www.realfootball365.com/nfl/articles/2006/08/herm-edwards-chiefs100806.html

Ari Chi3fs
08-10-2006, 05:30 PM
holy shit that site sucks.

Firefox prevented 3 popup ads, but not the 2 pop under ads. What a shitty way to do business.

Dartgod
08-10-2006, 05:31 PM
They have an editor that missed the error too.
Fixed your post...

Ultra Peanut
08-10-2006, 05:31 PM
bumbp

Ari Chi3fs
08-10-2006, 05:33 PM
Good article btw, GoChiefs... but you may need to find a better avenue for your words than PopUpadfootball.com

bogie
08-10-2006, 05:34 PM
Good for you! Congratulations on your success and thanks for sharing with us.

InChiefsHell
08-10-2006, 05:48 PM
Good article btw, GoChiefs... but you may need to find a better avenue for your words than PopUpadfootball.com

Meh, everybody's gotta start somewhere...

Way to go, GoChiefs...

(That seemed redundant...)