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HemiEd 07-30-2012 10:30 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by TinyEvel (Post 8777550)
Does anyone else think this reads like it was written by a fifth grader? I mean, not to be a dick, but it just reads like a kid's book report.

Yes, and when was it written?

Agent V 07-30-2012 10:57 AM

The writing is atrocious. Here's one example.

"Cassel is himself coming off an injury."

Don't worry. He's still himself. It hasn't changed him. That's how that reads. Just write, "Cassel is also returning from injury." God.

Ace Gunner 07-30-2012 12:06 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by HemiEd (Post 8777603)
Yes, and when was it written?

July 16, 2012 (link provided)

loochy 07-30-2012 01:21 PM

KCNut wrote this


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