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Mama Hip Rockets 03-15-2014 03:17 PM

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Originally Posted by Simply Red (Post 10493200)
I think it's pretty darned good, I'd look into some London white label instrumentals for a unique 'beat' back-drop.

Thanks!

-King- 03-15-2014 07:49 PM

Are you a slaughterhouse fan?

Mama Hip Rockets 03-15-2014 08:54 PM

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Originally Posted by -King- (Post 10493796)
Are you a slaughterhouse fan?

Haven't really heard a lot from them. I remember thinking what I heard was decent.

Shogun 03-15-2014 10:03 PM

I enjoyed that for the most part. I thought it could benefit overall from the bars being a little quicker, especially Poltergeist Jones, seemed kind of behind the beat. But I downloaded it, I'll listen to some more and be sure to post when the album is out. Nice track

Mama Hip Rockets 03-16-2014 11:30 AM

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Originally Posted by Shogun (Post 10494246)
I enjoyed that for the most part. I thought it could benefit overall from the bars being a little quicker, especially Poltergeist Jones, seemed kind of behind the beat. But I downloaded it, I'll listen to some more and be sure to post when the album is out. Nice track

Thanks for the feedback.

NewChief 03-16-2014 11:43 AM

Dug it for sure. Not exactly my usual style of hip hop, but I like it.

Mama Hip Rockets 03-16-2014 12:20 PM

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Originally Posted by NewChief (Post 10495623)
Dug it for sure. Not exactly my usual style of hip hop, but I like it.

Thanks!

Molitoth 03-17-2014 11:25 AM

respect. Nice job.

Mama Hip Rockets 03-17-2014 11:48 AM

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Originally Posted by Molitoth (Post 10497932)
respect. Nice job.

Thanks, dude!

KC native 03-17-2014 09:11 PM

Very Chino XLish.

Pretty good song man. You slightly rush in a couple spots during the middle of your verses (where you're a little wordy, either drop a couple words or just hesitate a breath). Otherwise it's perfect.

KC native 03-17-2014 09:16 PM

Listened to a couple more of your songs. You jump the beat slightly when you try to fit a long sentence in during your rhymes.

Your style is similar to Chino XL and El-P. Tighten that timing up and it will sound more polished.

Mama Hip Rockets 03-18-2014 06:42 AM

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Originally Posted by KC native (Post 10499186)
Very Chino XLish.

Pretty good song man. You slightly rush in a couple spots during the middle of your verses (where you're a little wordy, either drop a couple words or just hesitate a breath). Otherwise it's perfect.

I appreciate the feedback!

Mama Hip Rockets 03-21-2014 06:41 AM

Full album is out today, and it's got Bo Jackson on the album cover.

http://joshuakennedy.bandcamp.com/album/good-clean-fun


http://i1.sndcdn.com/artworks-000073...al.jpg?435a760

jspchief 03-21-2014 11:56 AM

Very good, a little raw.

Mama Hip Rockets 03-21-2014 12:41 PM

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Originally Posted by jspchief (Post 10506341)
Very good, a little raw.

Thanks.


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