lewdog |
03-25-2012 10:05 PM |
For me the Vets lost in in creativity but had better Illustrations.
VETS
Comedic Value: 18- Kind of goes along with creativity for me. Needed some more happenings and obscene shit.
Illustrations: 25- Amazing pictures that look very realistic.
Spelling, punctuation: 24- I just noticed some extra commass here and there. Nothing too severe, although I wasn’t reading it with a fine tooth comb.
Creativity: 19: I expected it to be more outlandish. Good story but a few more twists and turns would have increased the points in this category.
Total= 86
NOOBS
Comedic Value: 24- I ****ing loved it. Of course I am a sucker for racist jokes and making fun of religion. The pictures added to the comedic value as well.
Illustrations: 21- Not as clean as the vets but did provide some great laughter.
Spelling, punctuation: 23- Nothing too obvious, some commas here and there.
Creativity: 23- Very creative and loved how is kept all flowing together.
Although I thought some of the creativity was somewhat lost in some of the drawn out parts that could have been condensed.
Total= 91
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