Originally Posted by kcnut
Well at least i'd written better then fatlock.
Nut, I seriously doubt that.
My best advice to you if you are seriously interested in making this your career is to take some grammar classes somewhere. I'm sure you can find them at a local college.
I like you on this board a whole lot, but you need to be realistic in your goals. Being a writer isn't something you just wake up one day and decide on.
If you want to do it, you need to take the classes and buy some books on grammar, tense, spelling, punctuation, formating, etc...