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Old 02-02-2008, 05:23 PM   #2
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LOL...that's pretty cheesy.

"I ALMOST DROWNED."

"ARE YOU DROWNING IN DEBT?"

"HELP ME SAAAAAAVE YOU!"

However it was well written, with a few minor issues that most won't notice.
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