Reading a couple from a very dear friend of mine Frank Rhyno. His first attempts at writing. Not bad actually.
Better than what my brother pumped out
http://www.amazon.ca/Executive-Repri.../dp/1424143535
All personal hate for the guy aside.
If regurgitated Hero becomes James bond in under 1 year with the help of a Mr. Miaggie tutor , replayed, re-written used holly wood script adventure gets you off, this is the book.
Due wins a contest, gets covertly hired by ??? the Agency, gets set up and takes care of teh dudes who framed him. Leads cops on chases, etc, etc, etc.
About 100 pages too long, and the balistics are wayyyyy over explaned.