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Old 03-25-2011, 08:22 AM   #144
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OK. So to be completely fair, I've read a couple blog posts, and I don't think you're dumb at all.

However, your writing style can understandably make someone think otherwise. Your punctuation is horrendous. Just gawd awful. Run-on sentences are just unacceptable. You routinely have subject/verb agreement errors, miss possession vs. plural, and generally appear to have no clue how to properly form a sentence.

That said, just because you don't have a penchant for prose doesn't mean you're dumb. I've known a number of very intelligent individuals that couldn't form a coherent sentence if their lives depended on it.

But nothing you're doing can't be fixed. Google "subject/verb agreement" and "possessives versus plural" to get those things nailed down. Figure out how to use punctuation. It'll go a long way.

JMO. Carry on.
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