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It’s a cold January evening in Boston, MA, and wanna-be NFL QB Mark Castle sits in his apartment alone and depressed thinking about the future.
The first comma is separating the city from the state, and the second one is separating the first thought of the sentence to the second. Grammatically correct.
“Oh yeah!” Says? says Mark
No, you do not capitalize says, it's not the beginning of a new sentence. In this case (a quotation), the exclamation point does not end the sentence.
Sure is great to hear from you I’ve
you're right here, there should be a period
KC typo tto
right here too, but those first ones you are wrong
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