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Old 09-30-2012, 07:45 PM   #32
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I've seen college freshmen write better than this. The subjects are unclear, and the sentences are awkward. It's not like he's trying to explain something very complicated. He just doesn't know when to combine clauses or make new sentences.
Most of the people reading it don't know how to do any of that shit either.
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