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Old 06-06-2007, 04:04 PM   #13
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I was about to blast you on how bad the flow is in this article. Then I realized who wrote it.

I think that's part of the problem with Athan (among many other things). Even with an editor correcting all the grammar and spelling mistakes, it still reads like it was written by a middle-schooler. There's absolutely no flow to it whatsoever - just a bunch of sentences stuck together.
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