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It reminds me of the Northern Pikes mixed with the Deftones vocalist in a somber mood:
Here's the Northern Pikes song, (on Canada Day fittingly...)
The song is very well produced but the fact that it's +5 mins is pretentious. (The Northern Pikes song is under 4 mins and I doubt you would sit through the whole thing)
The melody is very familiar. That either means it was lifted or you've hit on somthing that's never been done before, (unlikely).
I suggest that you rearrange it to cut out the fat, and add a climax at the 3 minute mark with a gradual, yet brief, tail off.
I have many more suggestions but you will have to hire me at a rate of 11% of any of your future earnings.
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