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Originally Posted by irishjayhawk
That's not a good example of phoning it in.
A good example of that is this exchange:
E: I'm fine with you staying over, if you want to.
Ashley: I'm not going to.
E: That's fine.
Ashley: I am.
E: That's fine.
(Repeat 3 times over)
Ashley: Well, it doesn't sound like it.
E: I already said I'm fine with it if you want to.
Ashley: Okay, than I will.
*Writers note: Oh shit, I gotta have something happen to avoid going into a 4th repeat*
Cue: Sloan on phone.
Ashley: gonna get that
E: No
Ashley: gonna get that
E: No:
(Repeat 2x)
*Oh shit I've got nothing else.*
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I found that scene realistic