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Originally Posted by The Bad Guy
You're right - I'd like the mods to change it to:
Claythan is a stealing scumbag loser.
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I still don't think this title is completely grammatically correct. The way it reads right now, you'd think I was losing scumbags, as if I had trouble keeping track of them, or they were constantly falling out of my scumbag tote.
I think it would best read as:
Claythan is a scumbag and a stealing loser.
Overall, "stealing loser" is still pretty awkward.
You could go with "Claythan is a scumbag and a loser thief."
Although, if your hypothesis is that I'm a thief, and apparently a successful one since the police aren't knocking on my door, "loser thief" really isn't accurately descriptive. Perhaps "master thief" would work best?