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The Maintenance Guy
Join Date: Sep 2005
Location: Renovated Bugeater Estate
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THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME
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#3 |
Bump it
Join Date: Nov 2008
Location: South Dakota
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So this is the thread explaining how you bought and paid for judges ****ed us out of winning even though we so clearly win this round.
Great... So it begins..... |
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Bump it
Join Date: Nov 2008
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If we lose, heads will be rolling.
I will be getting all you ****ers on the vets team, and the judges, banned. |
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#5 |
Needs more middle fingers
Join Date: Mar 2005
Location: San Diego
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Must be like waiting for a Cassel led Chiefs team to win a Playoff game, eh?
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The Maintenance Guy
Join Date: Sep 2005
Location: Renovated Bugeater Estate
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At least this is providing a distraction from the KU circlejerk in the Lounge. That place is going to be unbearable for the next week.
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#7 |
Take a Chill Pill
Join Date: Nov 2006
Location: South Carolina
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So who are the n00bs sending home this week?
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legend
Join Date: Oct 2006
Location: Independence, MO
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No ****ing kidding, I couldn't get through the good damn park without queers dancing all around in blue and res. This is my worst nightmare all over again.
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#9 |
legend
Join Date: Oct 2006
Location: Independence, MO
Casino cash: $-3337903
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So I have my points takes on everything but the spelling and shit, so ill go over them for that crap when I get to work then I'll get my scores up.
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Tip of the hat LIV Champs
Join Date: Jun 2007
Location: ks
Casino cash: $225421
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#11 |
Bump it
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#12 |
Stuff & Things
Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: The Yukon
Casino cash: $10126924
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Here's my scores and an explanation of how I judged each entry:
I'll start with the Vets... Vets, Just an awesome job. I can't express how happy I am with the artwork. This picture in particular was just great. ![]() The front cover looks like something I'd find on a real book. Very accurate and funny. (Nice pricetag) The back cover was a nice bonus with some funny shit. The Fisty pic on the airliner left a little something to be desired. Total Points for artwork: 23 Creativity: The story started out fast and it held my attention. However, the story was a little bland and seemed to just state history more than being creative with the story. I guess what I'm saying is, I expected you guys to take a few more "artistic liberties" with the story. Total points for Creativity: 17 Spelling and Punctuation: I saw 3 errors with being a comma-tard in the 1st couple paragraphs. That's it, pretty good job. Total points for punctuation: 22 Comedic value: Well, this is the most important piece of the puzzle. First of all, the pics really made me laugh. Like I said, the one with Pioli made me laugh my ass off. The covers were both great as well. "Buck... lol" And the shit about Phobia was great as well. The story, well... It just left a little to be desired. Of course, the Pioli and Castle bashing was funny, (like it always is) but I think you could have done more with it. It was entertaining and to the point, for sure. However, I think you guys started out like gang busters and just fizzled a bit at the end. Total Points for Comedic Value: 17 Grand total: 79 Points |
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#13 |
Stuff & Things
Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: The Yukon
Casino cash: $10126924
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Please give me 15 minutes for my ruling on the n00bs.
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#14 |
Bump it
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Location: South Dakota
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Well. That's a C+ for the vets
Better than i would have gave them, but we shall see. |
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#15 |
The Maintenance Guy
Join Date: Sep 2005
Location: Renovated Bugeater Estate
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The **** you talking about with the commatards in the first couple paragraphs?
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