realfootball365.com has a new Chiefs writer...

[Hammock Parties]

ME!!!

My debut article was published this morning.

http://www.realfootball365.com/nfl/articles/2006/07/brodie-croyle-chiefs270706.html

/end attention whoring

[Archie Bunker]

Congrats sir

[Donger]

"They have a new head coach that appears to be steering the franchise in the right direction."

"That" appears?

[Ultra Peanut]

goCE

[Hammock Parties]

"They have a new head coach that appears to be steering the franchise in the right direction."

"That" appears?

Looks like they need an editor, too...

[KingPriest2]

Do you have firsthand knowledge that it is a concern?

[Moooo]

"They have a new head coach that appears to be steering the franchise in the right direction."

"That" appears?

Although usually I am anti-grammar police, if you're actually publishing work, whether internet-based or not, perhaps you should have someone edit it for you.

Other than that, kudos!

Moooo

[Donger]

Looks like they need an editor, too...

Nice article, BTW.

[the Talking Can]

congrats....

[the Talking Can]

nice pop-ups...old school

[HemiEd]

Nice job for the most part. However, I do not remember Grbac being run out of town. It was quite different, Chiefs were counting on him and he signed with Baltimore.

[Rain Man]

Wait a minute. That was lifted straight from "The Old Man and the Sea."

[Hammock Parties]

Wait a minute. That was lifted straight from "The Old Man and the Sea."

My next piece is plagiarised from "War and Peace."

[Hammock Parties]

Although usually I am anti-grammar police, if you're actually publishing work, whether internet-based or not, perhaps you should have someone edit it for you.

Other than that, kudos!

Moooo

They have an editor. I guess he missed that error.

[Eleazar]

How are you going to type for that other site with Nick Athan's crank still embedded in your mouf?

[Halfcan]

Nice one-you might be the next Bob Gretz!

[Hammock Parties]

How are you going to type for that other site with Nick Athan's crank still embedded in your mouf?

It's only once a week. I'm sure I can find some time somewhere during my busy fellatio schedule.

[the Talking Can]

Nice one-you might be the next Bob Gretz!

if he becomes fluent with the ubiquitous use of the word "ubiquity" he can be that fairy English fellow who writes for the Chiefs...Ubiquitous Dawes.....

[Pitt Gorilla]

"They have a new head coach that appears to be steering the franchise in the right direction."

"That" appears?I'm more concerned with the statement. I haven't seen enough of Herm in KC to have any clue about his "steering." I like the guy a lot, but what has he done?

[Hammock Parties]

I've been pretty impressed with the off-season thus far. I think he's doing a good job. That's all I meant to say.

[Pitt Gorilla]

I've been pretty impressed with the off-season thus far. I think he's doing a good job. That's all I meant to say.I think that's fine, and I believe you; I have no idea what he's done in terms of being a head coach.

[The Bad Guy]

Since I can't see the first few posts, what was Go's typo?

[Hammock Parties]

Since I can't see the first few posts, what was Go's typo?

"They have a new head coach that appears to be steering the franchise in the right direction."

"That" appears?

[dirk digler]

Nice article gochiefs and congrats.

[The Bad Guy]

What is the problem with that?

Keep in mind, my brain is fried from interviewing and sending out resumes the last week so I'm not on the top of my grammar game.

[Moooo]

What is the problem with that?

Keep in mind, my brain is fried from interviewing and sending out resumes the last week so I'm not on the top of my grammar game.

A head coach is not a "that," he is a "who."

Moooo

[The Bad Guy]

A head coach is not a "that," he is a "who."

Moooo

And that's why I'm not applying for editor jobs.

[StcChief]

Nice short/sweet.

Printers in the equation?

[tk13]

A head coach is not a "that," he is a "who."

Moooo
Herm's a thin, oddly shaped creature that is terrorized by the Grinch?

[Halfcan]

You should have checked with me-I would have gave you the Hali signing scoop for your article.

[Hammock Parties]

That would have been a boring article.

[Moooo]

Herm's a thin, oddly shaped creature that is terrorized by the Grinch?

Yes...

Moooo

[Rain Man]

A head coach is not a "that," he is a "who."

Moooo

Exception: Shanahan is a 'that'.

[Donger]

Exception: Shanahan is a 'that'.

ROFL

One just knew that was coming.

[CupidStunt]

Where can I find the "original Chiefs content" as stated in the footnote?

[jspchief]

Congrats JBret.

[Hammock Parties]

This week's article is up!

http://www.realfootball365.com/nfl/articles/2006/08/kansascity-chiefs-receivers030806.html

[Eleazar]

Bumping your own spam, quality stuff.

[Rudy tossed tigger's salad]

C.E. Wendler? how long did it take to come up with that?

[Hammock Parties]

That's my real name.

[Hammock Parties]

Another article...

http://www.realfootball365.com/nfl/articles/2006/08/herm-edwards-chiefs100806.html

[teedubya]

holy shit that site sucks.

Firefox prevented 3 popup ads, but not the 2 pop under ads. What a shitty way to do business.

[Dartgod]

They have an editor that missed the error too.
Fixed your post...

[Ultra Peanut]

bumbp

[teedubya]

Good article btw, GoChiefs... but you may need to find a better avenue for your words than PopUpadfootball.com

[bogie]

Good for you! Congratulations on your success and thanks for sharing with us.

[InChiefsHeaven]

Good article btw, GoChiefs... but you may need to find a better avenue for your words than PopUpadfootball.com

Meh, everybody's gotta start somewhere...

Way to go, GoChiefs...

(That seemed redundant...)