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chagrin
08-09-2007, 07:07 AM
Lyrics from a song but what scheme/technique of poetry is this, or is it a scheme ro technique at all?

a man in my shoes runs a light, and all the papers lie tonight
but falling for you is the news of the day

Fire Me Boy!
08-09-2007, 07:08 AM
Rhyming?

Dr. Johnny Fever
08-09-2007, 07:09 AM
I was a creative writting minor... I should know this. However I'm apparently a loser.

chagrin
08-09-2007, 07:18 AM
Rhyming?

Haha - a dude here at work is asking about it and I have no idea, just thought I'd put it out there

chagrin
08-09-2007, 07:19 AM
I was a creative writting minor... I should know this. However I'm apparently a loser.

Heh, keep thinking!

crazycoffey
08-09-2007, 09:16 AM
I'll assume that the next few lines follow the same rhythm...


and then say, I don't think it has a name - there are some names for following a preset rhythm, like the Haiku (based soley on the syllable count)

Making your own rhythm and/or syllable and/or rhyming verse is part of the artistic expression.

the Talking Can
08-09-2007, 09:22 AM
a man in my shoes runs a light, and all the papers lie tonight
but falling for you is the news of the day

just a lyric...no formal rhyme scheme

chagrin
08-09-2007, 10:26 AM
just a lyric...no formal rhyme scheme

Thank you

crazycoffey
08-09-2007, 11:11 AM
Thank you

well, I said basically the same thing....

FAX
08-09-2007, 11:29 AM
It's sort of a shortened rubaiyat, but not really. I think you would need more of the lyric to figure it out.

I don't know what you would call it other than "free verse".

FAX