LyricalFoog: ?
LyricalFoog: its wasn't a funny story
LyricalFoog: buit it was a good read
ChiefsFan5840: you did not read that
LyricalFoog: i was entertained
LyricalFoog: i really did
ChiefsFan5840: wtf
ChiefsFan5840: you deserve a prize
LyricalFoog: yeah
LyricalFoog: the ending was shitty
LyricalFoog: i don't understand it actually

ROFL

I think it was awesome... It would be a fantastic short film. Where did you get this?

It was a good read, you also won't get it if you don't read the story. Did you write that Psicosis? That was awesome.

When I saw it was longer then your coming out party I decided it couldn't be worth reading.

It's an adventure, people. If you can't appreciate the journey, don't come whining to me!

I wish.

great read, but not funny.

I heard a great joke over the weekend.
"Did you ever wonder why God made women with two sets of lips?
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"It's pretty obvious, so they can piss and moan at the same time.'

Not sure how great it will be reading it, but if delivered properly it is funny as ***k

For Cliff Notes Version, highlight below...


Dude drives jeep into desert
Jeep dies on Dude and he walks for several days and gets lost.
Dude finds snake named "Nate" and a big rock with a lever in it that will destroy all mankind.
Dude talks to snake and they become friends
Dude and snake enter pact - dude gets extra health & wisdom points and the bonus of being able to survive with little water.
After a number of years, the snake has a son to take over the family business of being guardian of the lever.
Nate wants dude to take son and show him the world first.
Dude takes little snake and goes to see the world.
Dude brings little snake back, instead of walking to the rock with the lever that destroys the world, the get lazy and decide to drive.
Dude loses control of RV going down dune to rock and his heading straight for the lever.
Dude decides to try and turn the RV to the left - Nate is in his path.
He looks at the little snake and says "Better Nate than Lever"


Now see, this story could have been much, much shorter.

The white on white to save from spoiling really works better when the background is actually white.

But better? I think not.

Well that is the longest yellow box I have seen on the planet. I will finish the other half some other time....

Nice... I need a nap

I think I just got carpal tunnel scrolling through that...........what a jerk **ouch my hand**