2 things I really hate... being killed twice and waking up dead.

Scoring:
Ok, I've watched it twice now and I lol'd pretty damn hard both times. Good work guys!

The dragon aspect needed to be a little more subtle, maybe? The blast on Phil was just awesome. Good luck with the bannings, btw.
Humor score: 45 out of 50

Let's face it, you can't be super creative when you just have two people sitting there. However, the sound effects, the pauses and the gestures were great. You guys worked everything you could into it. The credits and the time pauses were great. I also noticed there were only one or two words in the dialogue that I had to rewind on.
Good work guys.
Creativity score:
47 out of 50

Total score:
92 out of 100

Parts were funny, but the phone bit went on WAY WAY WAY too long.

I liked how creepy and ugly you made Gonzo tho, that made me laugh.

Yeah, the phone call broke the rhythm up a bit no doubt, but that was the only way to work a 3rd person into the video.

Deleted & bonus scenes:

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ROFL

you guys shoulda just let Omaha write your story.

Too bad this doesn't count.

Honestly, I think it would've worked out better if we had all written our own. When you get that many people working on the same thing you end up with something that is either too long or too ****ed up.

Especially loochy? Wtf????

YEah. You guys blew it.

We should score at least 97 on this.

ROFL I wouldn't go that far.

Ok here's my take...

Humor
I loved Gonzo's bald head and 'stache that made him look like a child molester. Lots of great lines... "ask her if she's into anal.... crickets... yes he's a ****ing douchbag." Laughed out loud several times. The "twist" at the end was nice with the dragon twin Lumpy leave's Gonzo for. The "credits" were funny. Nice work on the language heh.

Humor score... 47 out of 50

Creativity
There's only so much you can do with that forum I'm sure and things were put together nicely. The phone conversation was maybe a bit awkward with the two of them just standing there looking at each other but again... probably the best you could do. The fart was a nice touch lol. I assumed it was Gonzo that ripped it but wasn't certain so maybe one of them saying something like "you gross ****ing pig" to the other would have made that even better... especially if it was Gonzo blaming Lumpy. As I mentioned I liked the crickets.

Creativity score... 43 of out 50

Total score 91 out of 100

Nicely done!

LMAO


Dick...

:D Sorry, bro.

I think ours is clearly better.

LOL why especially me? You pooptaco.