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BucEyedPea 06-17-2014 12:58 PM

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Originally Posted by Just Passin' By (Post 10697915)
Regarding your grammar error. You screwed up a simple rule. I pointed it out. You're the one who's been defensive about it. Look to your own self on this one.

The time log disputes your claim. And it's also irrelevant to the topic.
Hey, I make typos including using its when I needed it's.

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Now, I've got to run. Have fun insisting a preference is actually a rule.
LOL If you're still in printing, you should know better. But okay.

Fire Me Boy! 06-17-2014 12:58 PM

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Originally Posted by Just Passin' By (Post 10697908)
I'm not wrong, and your own understanding of the typewriter situation should tell you that.



Christ, you people are failing logic 101.


Typesetting in the non-typewriter world was one space. The typewriter came around and they had to figure out how to deal with no kearning. So typewriter users started using two spaces. This doesn't make it right. It's a workaround that goes against established workflow. Now that typewriters are basically nonexistent, the established rules should rein.

ptlyon 06-17-2014 01:03 PM

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eDave 06-17-2014 01:06 PM

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Originally Posted by ptlyon (Post 10697934)
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ptlyon 06-17-2014 01:08 PM

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Originally Posted by eDave (Post 10697941)
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DAMMIT :banghead:

alnorth 06-17-2014 01:12 PM

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Originally Posted by eDave (Post 10697941)
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Its hilarious how devastating a single letter in a response can be.

eDave 06-17-2014 01:14 PM

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Originally Posted by alnorth (Post 10697950)
Its hilarious how devastating a single letter in a response can be.

To be fair to our friend ptlyon, the original comment was just 3 commas.

Sorry ptlyon.

Aries Walker 06-17-2014 01:23 PM

I grew up with the two spaces rule, the reasoning being that it differentiates between a period used for, say, an abbreviation, and a period denoting the end of a sentence. It's a dying argument, though, because if nothing else HTML and other computer applications automatically take it out. I'm OK with that.

Regarding the Oxford Comma, however, I am resolute. There is no reason not to have it - it doesn't disrupt flow, it isn't ugly, and it doesn't confuse the message. Its benefits, however, are clear, as the Gilligan's Island example shows. I don't care what the AP says, it should be in.

The day that computers ever start automatically removing Oxford Commas is the day I set mine on fire and dump it in the river.

ptlyon 06-17-2014 01:25 PM

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Originally Posted by eDave (Post 10697957)
To be fair to our friend ptlyon, the original comment was just 3 commas.

Sorry ptlyon.

So was the correct answer 3 or 4?

Don't remember

lcarus 06-17-2014 01:28 PM

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Originally Posted by alnorth (Post 10697794)
There's actually not a clear winner on this, its pretty split down the middle right now.

Speaking of unnecessary commas...:D

Should be a period there homie

Rain Man 06-17-2014 01:28 PM

It appears that the thread has moved away from the opening post, but I just wanted to share that the Oxford comma is absolutely necessary. With the Oxford comma, I read this way.

San Diego, Denver, and Oakland

Without it, I read this way.

San Diego, DenverandOakland

It really bothers me.

Additionally, it's necessary sometimes for context. If it's not there, I assume that the final two items are the objects of another phrase until I get confused and re-read.

Fire Me Boy! 06-17-2014 01:29 PM

The Oxford Comma
 
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Originally Posted by lcarus (Post 10698008)
Speaking of unnecessary commas...:D

Should be a period there homie


Actually, a semicolon there would have been correct.

Not to mention the correct use of it's.

eDave 06-17-2014 01:29 PM

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Originally Posted by ptlyon (Post 10698000)
So was the correct answer 3 or 4?

Don't remember

Semi-colon.

Reaper16 06-17-2014 01:29 PM

I use the Oxford Comma 100% of the time. I've fought with editors over keeping it in a piece.

Being under 30 years old, I laughed out loud when I first learned that people were once taught to do two spaces. There's never been a need for it in my lifetime. Also, two spaces looks awful.

lcarus 06-17-2014 01:30 PM

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Originally Posted by Fried Meat Ball! (Post 10698015)
Actually, a semicolon there would have been correct.

Not to mention the correct use of it's.

I've never been a big fan of the semicolon.

Jiu Jitsu Jon 06-17-2014 01:30 PM

Comma Comma Comma Comma Com-ma Chameleon....you come and go, you come and goooooo".

lcarus 06-17-2014 01:31 PM

And I've always used the Oxford comma. I guess I'm old school like that.

Rain Man 06-17-2014 01:33 PM

Two spaces after a sentence are a good thing. They help the writer recognize that a thought was finished, and a new one is about to begin. It's not about printing and kerning and stuff. It's a psychological tool to help people recognize that an ending just took place. We need two spaces for our mental well being.

Fire Me Boy! 06-17-2014 01:34 PM

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Originally Posted by Rain Man (Post 10698032)
Two spaces after a sentence are a good thing. They help the writer recognize that a thought was finished, and a new one is about to begin. It's not about printing and kerning and stuff. It's a psychological tool to help people recognize that an ending just took place. We need two spaces for our mental well being.


I thought you were better. I am disappoint.

Rain Man 06-17-2014 01:35 PM

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Originally Posted by Fried Meat Ball! (Post 10698040)
I thought you were better. I am disappoint.

It's hard for me to understand what you're saying since your sentences are so close together. It's like you're rambling incessantly.

lcarus 06-17-2014 01:37 PM

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Originally Posted by Rain Man (Post 10698032)
Two spaces after a sentence are a good thing. They help the writer recognize that a thought was finished, and a new one is about to begin. It's not about printing and kerning and stuff. It's a psychological tool to help people recognize that an ending just took place. We need two spaces for our mental well being.

I am a FIRM supporter of the 2 space method, as you can tell from almost all of my posts on this site. However, I always considered the period as the tool to recognize that an ending took place and a new thought or sentence was beginning...

Fire Me Boy! 06-17-2014 01:38 PM

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Originally Posted by lcarus (Post 10698056)
I am a FIRM supporter of the 2 space method, as you can tell from almost all of my posts on this site. However, I always considered the period as the tool to recognize that an ending took place and a new thought or sentence was beginning...


I knew there was a reason I subconsciously hated you.

underEJ 06-17-2014 01:40 PM

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Originally Posted by Aries Walker (Post 10697995)
I grew up with the two spaces rule, the reasoning being that it differentiates between a period used for, say, an abbreviation, and a period denoting the end of a sentence. It's a dying argument, though, because if nothing else HTML and other computer applications automatically take it out. I'm OK with that.

Regarding the Oxford Comma, however, I am resolute. There is no reason not to have it - it doesn't disrupt flow, it isn't ugly, and it doesn't confuse the message. Its benefits, however, are clear, as the Gilligan's Island example shows. I don't care what the AP says, it should be in.

The day that computers ever start automatically removing Oxford Commas is the day I set mine on fire and dump it in the river.

I don't care much about the spaces for general use. However, I am a writer. Courier is the only choice, so my habit is to use the expected two. I appreciate the auto corrects when I double space and it is not necessary, but I don't really care about ugly unless it is on a letter or something official.

Agree on the comma auto-correct.

BucEyedPea 06-17-2014 01:42 PM

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Originally Posted by Reaper16 (Post 10698017)
Being under 30 years old, I laughed out loud when I first learned that people were once taught to do two spaces. There's never been a need for it in my lifetime. Also, two spaces looks awful.

Well this provides hope. When everyone over thirty dies, the right way will be the accepted way. Narrow is the path and few are the feet that walk upon it currently. :D

BucEyedPea 06-17-2014 01:43 PM

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Originally Posted by underEJ (Post 10698070)
I don't care much about the spaces for general use. However, I am a writer. Courier is the only choice, so my habit is to use the expected two. I appreciate the auto corrects when I double space and it is not necessary, but I don't really care about ugly unless it is on a letter or something official.

Agree on the comma auto-correct.

Courier is a poorly designed font for reading. There are better choices.

listopencil 06-17-2014 01:46 PM

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Originally Posted by DaFace (Post 10697806)
It seems odd to me not to use it to me, though I know some places say not to. Commas generally indicate pauses when read aloud, and I generally say:

red (pause) white (pause) and blue

rather than

red (pause) white and blue

I tend to think of "and" as the pause in flow that denotes the end of a list.

listopencil 06-17-2014 01:47 PM

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Originally Posted by Rain Man (Post 10698032)
Two spaces after a sentence are a good thing. They help the writer recognize that a thought was finished, and a new one is about to begin. It's not about printing and kerning and stuff. It's a psychological tool to help people recognize that an ending just took place. We need two spaces for our mental well being.

We should just use three spaces and an ampersand.

Reaper16 06-17-2014 01:48 PM

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Originally Posted by BucEyedPea (Post 10698081)
Courier is a poorly designed font for reading. There are better choices.

I detest Courier, but if you're a screenplay writer (which I'm guessing underEJ is) that is the industry standard - just the way things are done.

underEJ 06-17-2014 01:50 PM

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Originally Posted by BucEyedPea (Post 10698081)
Courier is a poorly designed font for reading. There are better choices.

That may be true, but it is required for submission.

BucEyedPea 06-17-2014 01:51 PM

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Originally Posted by Reaper16 (Post 10698095)
I detest Courier, but if you're a screenplay writer (which I'm guessing underEJ is) that is the industry standard - just the way things are done.

Really? Very interesting. I knew there was strict formatting and all or a screenplay is never looked at but tossed in the trash. I didn't know it extended to the font. I wonder if it has to do with how the entire page is formatted too? What is "under EJ?"

lcarus 06-17-2014 01:51 PM

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Originally Posted by Fried Meat Ball! (Post 10698062)
I knew there was a reason I subconsciously hated you.

And I thought we were strawberry jelly buddies now. :(

NewChief 06-17-2014 01:52 PM

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Fire Me Boy! 06-17-2014 01:53 PM

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Originally Posted by lcarus (Post 10698109)
And I thought we were strawberry jelly buddies now. :(


I'm willing to reconsider, you'll need to amend your stance on the double space. Some things cannot be tolerated.

lcarus 06-17-2014 01:54 PM

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Originally Posted by Fried Meat Ball! (Post 10698115)
I'm willing to reconsider, you'll need to amend your stance on the double space. Some things cannot be tolerated.

I guess I can try. Nope.I just can't seem to grasp it. How do you do it? I guess I will just have to practice.

DaFace 06-17-2014 01:55 PM

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Originally Posted by lcarus (Post 10698056)
I am a FIRM supporter of the 2 space method, as you can tell from almost all of my posts on this site. However, I always considered the period as the tool to recognize that an ending took place and a new thought or sentence was beginning...

Actually, we can't. As mentioned, web sites natively ignore two spaces in a row.

I naturally do two spaces all the time because that's how I learned to type, but I acknowledge that it's really not correct at all.

BucEyedPea 06-17-2014 01:56 PM

Ok I see now! "Under EJ" is another poster.

BucEyedPea 06-17-2014 01:57 PM

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Originally Posted by underEJ (Post 10698102)
That may be true, but it is required for submission.

I would like to know the rationale for that. Is there one?

lcarus 06-17-2014 01:58 PM

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Originally Posted by DaFace (Post 10698122)
Actually, we can't.

Well you should just know from my demeanor and presence that I'm a 2 space kind of guy.

Rain Man 06-17-2014 02:00 PM

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Originally Posted by BucEyedPea (Post 10698127)
I would like to know the rationale for that. Is there one?

Maybe actors have trouble doing a Helvetica or Garamond accent.

Rain Man 06-17-2014 02:02 PM

As a westerner, I also want two spaces because that's our culture. We're used to lots of open space out here. You easterners can cram all your words into a little space if you want, but out here we're all about big skies and wide-open sentence construction.

BucEyedPea 06-17-2014 02:02 PM

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Originally Posted by Rain Man (Post 10698134)
Maybe actors have trouble doing a Helvetica or Garamond accent.

Ha! Ha! Well sans-serifs, like Hevetica, are even harder to read. Serifs are best for lots of reading of text. The x-height on Garamond is a bit small.

I'm just curious is all.

BucEyedPea 06-17-2014 02:03 PM

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Originally Posted by Rain Man (Post 10698141)
As a westerner, I also want two spaces because that's our culture. We're used to lots of open space out here. You easterners can cram all your words into a little space if you want, but out here we're all about big skies and wide-open sentence construction.

Must be why we read twice as fast, while you slow pokes take your time. We're the intellectuals.

underEJ 06-17-2014 02:04 PM

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Originally Posted by BucEyedPea (Post 10698108)
Really? Very interesting. I knew there was strict formatting and all or a screenplay is never looked at but tossed in the trash. I didn't know it extended to the font. I wonder if it has to do with how the entire page is formatted too? What is "under EJ?"

I think it has two reasons. The industry is very nostalgic, and the image of screenwriter slaving over typewriter pages is not going to change anytime soon. More pragmatically, we are also beholden to producers who need to mark up a script to break it down, and performers who need to find their way to dialogue easily while rehearsing. Standardizing is the best idea, and since it has always been standardized, why change it?

underEJ was a location in arrowhead stadium in the shorthand of the kids from my neighborhood growing up. Now that the ring of honor is gone, none of us would be able to find our way around with the old code, though. That particular spot was the location where you could find Willie Lanier enjoying the game and chat with retired Chiefs.

lcarus 06-17-2014 02:04 PM

Rain Man is a word claustrophobic

Rain Man 06-17-2014 02:08 PM

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Originally Posted by BucEyedPea (Post 10698146)
Must be why we read twice as fast, while you slow pokes take your time. We're the intellectuals.


You people don't take the time to appreciate a well-placed semi-colon or elegant tilde. You've lost the ability to appreciate the natural beauty of the sentence.

underEJ 06-17-2014 02:08 PM

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Originally Posted by underEJ (Post 10698148)
I think it has two reasons. The industry is very nostalgic, and the image of screenwriter slaving over typewriter pages is not going to change anytime soon. More pragmatically, we are also beholden to producers who need to mark up a script to break it down, and performers who need to find their way to dialogue easily while rehearsing. Standardizing is the best idea, and since it has always been standardized, why change it?

I forgot one. It also sells screenwriting software.

lcarus 06-17-2014 02:09 PM

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Originally Posted by DaFace (Post 10698122)
As mentioned, web sites natively ignore two spaces in a row.

I feel like the damn internet is oppressing my paragraph structuring preference. I'm outta here! :mad:

BucEyedPea 06-17-2014 02:10 PM

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Originally Posted by underEJ (Post 10698148)
I think it has two reasons. The industry is very nostalgic, and the image of screenwriter slaving over typewriter pages is not going to change anytime soon. More pragmatically, we are also beholden to producers who need to mark up a script to break it down, and performers who need to find there way to dialogue easily while rehearsing. Standardizing is the best idea, and since it has always been standardized, why change it?

Well now! I think that makes perfect sense, especially the marking-up which I've seen. The extra space would allow that. Reminds me of my few few years in my industry before widespread use of computer, where the designer had to mark-up a typewritten document for the typesetter. That's what those marked-up screenplays remind me of.

Courier looks like typewriter characters. It also has that wide and higher x-height which must be easier to see when rehearsing lines. Okay, I think I get it plus all the background info. Thanks.

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underEJ was a location in arrowhead stadium in the shorthand of the kids from my neighborhood growing up. Now that the ring of honor is gone, none of use would be able to find our way around with the old code, though. That particular spot was the location where you could find Willie Lanier enjoying the game and chat with retired Chiefs.
Interesting. I didn't know he was referring to a poster was all. Thanks for the additional info.

Fire Me Boy! 06-17-2014 02:11 PM

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Originally Posted by BucEyedPea (Post 10698127)
I would like to know the rationale for that. Is there one?


It's about timing. One page of properly formatted screenwriting is generally 1 minute of screen time (unless the page is action heavy with little dialogue).

BucEyedPea 06-17-2014 02:12 PM

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Originally Posted by underEJ (Post 10698161)
I forgot one. It also sells screenwriting software.

Well, I think software designers look to serve different professions.

BucEyedPea 06-17-2014 02:13 PM

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Originally Posted by Fried Meat Ball! (Post 10698168)
It's about timing. One page of properly formatted screenwriting is generally 1 minute of screen time (unless the page is action heavy with little dialogue).

Yeah, my daughter who attends Florida State as a creative writing major and film minor, told me that. She's working for a film marketing firm up there this summer.

alnorth 06-17-2014 02:22 PM

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Originally Posted by lcarus (Post 10698008)
Speaking of unnecessary commas...:D

Should be a period there homie

Or at least a semicolon. (no, I am not going to look up the semicolon rule to verify)

I admit that I overuse commas, so I'm probably the right person to put up the poll.

alnorth 06-17-2014 02:23 PM

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Originally Posted by Fried Meat Ball! (Post 10698015)
Actually, a semicolon there would have been correct.

Not to mention the correct use of it's.

hah, I'll be damned, so my semicolon comment was right?

lcarus 06-17-2014 02:45 PM

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Originally Posted by alnorth (Post 10698203)
hah, I'll be damned, so my semicolon comment was right?

Supposedly a semicolon is used correctly when you have 2 short sentences that are hooked together that don't (but could) use the conjunctions "and" or "but". Or that is one rock solid use for a semicolon. There are some other uses but that is one I know of. You should never connect 2 sentences with a comma. Not that anyone is going to give a shit.

Fire Me Boy! 06-17-2014 03:12 PM

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Originally Posted by alnorth (Post 10698203)
hah, I'll be damned, so my semicolon comment was right?

Yes.

Chief Roundup 06-17-2014 03:15 PM

We are in the "Food Lounge" of Chiefs Planet.

BucEyedPea 06-17-2014 03:16 PM

Well, it's a lounge. People eat, drink and snack in a lounge too. Plus, talk about it.

keg in kc 06-17-2014 03:17 PM

I never use it.

lcarus 06-17-2014 03:20 PM

I've had a more intelligent discussion today about the use of Oxford commas and semicolons than any discussion I've had with my dipshit co-workers in the past month. Yeah...I need a new place to work.

duncan_idaho 06-17-2014 03:44 PM

I'm anti-Oxford comma in almost all cases.

I understand some people find the serial comma to be necessary because of confusion with sequences if you do not use it, but ambiguity can also exist from using the serial comma (as it can make the item before the conjunction look like it modifies the item preceding it in the list).

Personally, when I have the red pen of hatred (what my writers and editors used to call my editing pen) out, I prefer to avoid sequencing and commas (Oxford or otherwise) all together. I believe re-wording the sentence, is the most consistent and concise way to eliminate ambiguity.

Examples:

"To my editors, Patrick Rothfuss and Jim Butcher." (Ambiguous - are Rothfuss and Butcher my editors?)

"To my editor, Patrick Rothfuss, and Jim Butcher." (in this case, it is ambiguous because the first item in the sequence is singular, which could mean I'm dedicating the book to Patrick Rothfuss, who is my editor, or to my editor and Patrick Rothfuss, who are two separate people)

"To my editors and Patrick Rothfuss and Jim Butcher." (This is my preferred, comma-free method for handling sequences, but it doesn't work well if you're listing more than three items.)

It's my opinion that whatever benefit you gain in clarification of meaning is lost in the increased choppiness of the reading pattern. Commas cause pauses, and that often makes it harder to read.

It's funny... I'm very new age when it comes to comma and semi-colon use, but there are some old school things that still push my buttons. These include:
  • Collective nouns being referred to as "they" (Team is an IT)
  • Saying a team won a game "over" another team (you win "against' an opponent, not "over" an undetermined space)
  • Saying your concerns are centered "on" something (for something to be centered, it must be "around" another something, not on top of it)

alnorth 06-17-2014 03:49 PM

yep, I knew there were examples of the serial comma also leading to confusion, which is why I don't like to use that argument, though the Stalin and JFK strippers are funny.

To me, the easiest and most compelling argument is that commas denote a pause, and this is how a series is spoken. The Oxford comma or lack of one could lead to confusion in various cases, but in all cases, we all pause before the "and", and thats why I believe it should be correct. I strongly believe the AP is wrong, and almost all the other American style guides are right.

Reaper16 06-17-2014 03:53 PM

If you need a comma to suggest a pause then your prose isn't up to snuff. Your sentences ought to have a rhythm to them that will naturally overrule any possible "interruption" from an Oxford comma.

lcarus 06-17-2014 03:57 PM

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Originally Posted by Reaper16 (Post 10698390)
If you need a comma to suggest a pause then your prose isn't up to snuff. Your sentences ought to have a rhythm to them that will naturally overrule any possible "interruption" from an Oxford comma.

My sentences have more rhythm than Bobby ****ing Brown, so I suggest you strike that comment from the record.

duncan_idaho 06-17-2014 03:57 PM

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Originally Posted by Reaper16 (Post 10698390)
If you need a comma to suggest a pause then your prose isn't up to snuff. Your sentences ought to have a rhythm to them that will naturally overrule any possible "interruption" from an Oxford comma.

Agreed.

I always found the JFK and Stalin example unconvincing, personally. Since I would never write it as:

"We invited the strippers, John F. Kennedy and Josef Stalin."

I would instead write it as:

"We invited John F. Kennedy, Josef Stalin and three strippers."

I was taught that if you're introducing items in a sequence and some have a proper name, they should always be listed first. Any nouns standing in for a group of people (in this case, strippers) should come at the end of the sequence.

it reduces confusion about the relationship of the proper nouns to the group noun.

BucEyedPea 06-17-2014 03:57 PM

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lcarus 06-17-2014 04:00 PM

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Originally Posted by duncan_idaho (Post 10698395)
Agreed.

I always found the JFK and Stalin example unconvincing, personally. Since I would never write it as:

"We invited the strippers, John F. Kennedy and Josef Stalin."

I would instead write it as:

"We invited John F. Kennedy, Josef Stalin and three strippers."

I was taught that if you're introducing items in a sequence and some have a proper name, they should always be listed first. Any nouns standing in for a group of people (in this case, strippers) should come at the end of the sequence.

it reduces confusion about the relationship of the proper nouns to the group noun.

That's pretty much what I do as well. If something is confusing, I think about structuring the sentence differently rather than comma placement.

duncan_idaho 06-17-2014 04:01 PM

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Originally Posted by BucEyedPea (Post 10698396)

That's not an example of a serial comma.

BucEyedPea 06-17-2014 04:04 PM

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Originally Posted by duncan_idaho (Post 10698402)
That's not an example of a serial comma.

Yes I know. It's just an example of a comma--and confusion.

blaise 06-17-2014 04:15 PM

I think Elements of Style says yes. I do, but really my grammar is terrible. That's why I started writing plays instead of trying short stories. I can get away with more in dialogue.

Fire Me Boy! 06-17-2014 04:17 PM

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Originally Posted by lcarus (Post 10698399)
That's pretty much what I do as well. If something is confusing, I think about structuring the sentence differently rather than comma placement.

The problem, however, is that not everyone knows when it's confusing (or cares to look). The Oxford comma saves lives.

BucEyedPea 06-17-2014 05:33 PM

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Originally Posted by Fried Meat Ball! (Post 10698421)
The problem, however, is that not everyone knows when it's confusing (or cares to look). The Oxford comma saves lives.

ROFL

Rain Man 06-17-2014 05:37 PM

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Originally Posted by BucEyedPea (Post 10698330)
Well, it's a lounge. People eat, drink and snack in a lounge too. Plus, talk about it.

Not me. I eat, drink, and snack.


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