Should I post the whole thing in pr_'s link?

I guess let me know when it's finished so I can review it.

I think that's the plan. That way everyone can read the whole thing at once.

It's there. I love the part about the dragon eating Todd Haley. EPIC!!!!

One suggestion to smitty.

In the part where she wakes him up and says "We're in KC," maybe it should be "We're in Kansas City."

I don't think airline workers would ever say KC. They would say the name of the actual destination.

Buck, how did you like it?

Is it finished? Can't wait to read it. I had something come up but will get started on my illustration this evening.
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Looks good so far.

Should we add some more depth to it or does everyone think it's good the way it is?

I CANT SEE IT

Can do! I considered that, but was just typing away. Thanks Buck.

Me either!

Considering the n00bs haven't done shit, I think it's fine.

I thought it was really funny.

I don't know about that part at the very end Omaha....seems like a little too much.

OK somebody please PM me the link, I seem to be missing something.

I haven't read it (need the link) but if I get the time I may want to work on my opening a bit so don't submit it yet.