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Omaha 03-23-2012 09:25 PM

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Originally Posted by Lumpy (Post 8488404)
I'm all for you proofreading the damn thing. I proofread enough crap at work. LMAO

I have it noted in the OP that you will finish the story. I also have CrazyCoffey noted as doing 1 illustration. Should it come down to the wire, and CC doesn't pull through, I'll have a back-up illustration ready to go.

I had an idea for a picture, but it was pretty much going to be the one I had in the first contest w/ Fisty wearing a #7 jersey & dreaming of Pioli instead of the fat chick. The dragon would remain the same. Let me know if we need this to happen. :D

Lumpy 03-23-2012 09:28 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Omaha (Post 8488421)
I had an idea for a picture, but it was pretty much going to be the one I had in the first contest w/ Fisty wearing a #7 jersey & dreaming of Pioli instead of the fat chick. The dragon would remain the same. Let me know if we need this to happen. :D

You and that damn dragon. ROFL

Bugeater 03-23-2012 09:44 PM

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Originally Posted by Sofa King (Post 8488159)

OMGHAIRONFIRE

KS Smitty 03-23-2012 09:50 PM

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Originally Posted by Bugeater (Post 8488478)
OMGHAIRONFIRE

Did you get that stereo installed?

Bugeater 03-23-2012 10:09 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by KS Smitty (Post 8488493)
Did you get that stereo installed?

Yes I did. Wired up, installed, turns on, but no friggin' sound. Damn thing has me stumped.

Lumpy 03-23-2012 10:15 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Bugeater (Post 8488535)
Yes I did. Wired up, installed, turns on, but no friggin' sound. Damn thing has me stumped.

Are your speakers low on oil?

:D

Omaha 03-23-2012 10:18 PM

Bugeater, are you going to join our bikeride this summer?

Bugeater 03-23-2012 10:25 PM

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Originally Posted by Omaha (Post 8488562)
Bugeater, are you going to join our bikeride this summer?

If you're doing one that has the speed/length/terrain that I can handle. Aren't you guys hardcore road bikers?

Kyle DeLexus 03-23-2012 10:30 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Bugeater (Post 8488535)
Yes I did. Wired up, installed, turns on, but no friggin' sound. Damn thing has me stumped.

did you put a CD in?

Bugeater 03-23-2012 10:32 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kyle DeLexus (Post 8488602)
did you put a CD in?

I wasn't aware that I needed to do that to get the radio to work.

Omaha 03-23-2012 10:34 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Bugeater (Post 8488579)
If you're doing one that has the speed/length/terrain that I can handle. Aren't you guys hardcore road bikers?

No. You'll be fine. Avg 16mph all on trails. Beer & wings to follow.

Omaha 03-23-2012 10:35 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kyle DeLexus (Post 8488602)
did you put a CD in?

What's a CD?

Kyle DeLexus 03-23-2012 10:52 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Bugeater (Post 8488607)
I wasn't aware that I needed to do that to get the radio to work.



did you change it from CD to radio?

Bugeater 03-23-2012 10:56 PM

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Originally Posted by Omaha (Post 8488616)
No. You'll be fine. Avg 16mph all on trails. Beer & wings to follow.

Well keep me posted on when and where you're going. I've been trying to get my ass in shape.


Quote:

Originally Posted by Kyle DeLexus (Post 8488688)
did you change it from CD to radio?

Do I look like a goddamn reerun to you?

Wait, don't answer that.

The Franchise 03-23-2012 11:05 PM

Starting my paragraphs now. I should have it done in 10-15 minutes.

Bugeater 03-23-2012 11:17 PM

**** the story, I need help getting my stereo working

The Franchise 03-23-2012 11:20 PM

The story has been sent off to Smitty and Dartgod.

We're going to have to figure out how to send it back and forth through something other than PMs because it's to large.

Buck 03-23-2012 11:47 PM

Uh...what do I need to do?

Bugeater 03-23-2012 11:48 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Pestilence (Post 8488753)
The story has been sent off to Smitty and Dartgod.

We're going to have to figure out how to send it back and forth through something other than PMs because it's to large.

Already? That's going to be a problem.

Bugeater 03-23-2012 11:51 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Buck (Post 8488789)
Uh...what do I need to do?

Hell I'm not sure, Lumpy took charge of delegating responsibilities.

Buck 03-23-2012 11:54 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Pestilence (Post 8488753)
The story has been sent off to Smitty and Dartgod.

We're going to have to figure out how to send it back and forth through something other than PMs because it's to large.

Email?

Lumpy 03-23-2012 11:59 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Bugeater (Post 8488798)
Hell I'm not sure, Lumpy took charge of delegating responsibilities.

I don't know what you're talking about, Bug, I just updated the OP. :)

Buck, get w/ Smitty. She will lead you in the right direction.

Bugeater 03-24-2012 12:00 AM

Either that, or whoever is transferring it could go find an old post buried in a thread somewhere, edit the story into the post, and then send the link to that post to the next in line.

And that's assuming the thing doesn't get too long to fit into a single post.

Bugeater 03-24-2012 12:01 AM

Someone needs to come up with a title at some point as well.

Lumpy 03-24-2012 12:06 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Bugeater (Post 8488812)
Someone needs to come up with a title at some point as well.

You need to check the photobucket account. The cover is done... w/ a title. LMAO

pr_capone 03-24-2012 12:08 AM

sending everyone on the vets team a link via PM to resolve this text space issue

pr_capone 03-24-2012 12:11 AM

Hey CC... I can't send you a PM and I can't post this link in public. Fix it so I can PM you.

pr_capone 03-24-2012 12:13 AM

with the link I sent out... you basically complete your post, then send the most current link to the next person in line. That way everything gets kept on a single page and in the end a finished link can be sent out for review.

for example, bug start out his story and saves. a new link appears in the address bar, copy that he sends it to smitty. Smitty gets done and sends the updated link (the numbers change with each save) to the next person in line. on and on until we get a finished product.

Lumpy 03-24-2012 12:25 AM

Very cool, pr! Bugeater's idea was pretty good too!

Ya know, at the rate we're going, we could submit this tomorrow night. :thumb:

Speaking of which, I'm going to bed. I have a busy day ahead of me tomorrow, but I'll check in periodically throughout the day.

Excellent work, everyone!

crazycoffey 03-24-2012 05:57 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lumpy (Post 8488404)
I'm all for you proofreading the damn thing. I proofread enough crap at work. LMAO EDIT: Oh, and the review is a totally different deal. It's a synopsis.

I have it noted in the OP that you will finish the story. I also have CrazyCoffey noted as doing 1 illustration. Should it come down to the wire, and CC doesn't pull through, I'll have a back-up illustration ready to go.

I always come through, and all over. Im doing an illustration. Check. I can do some proof reading and writing too. Im working nights this weekend and going to bed now. Ill check back in when I wake up so have some marching orders for me!

crazycoffey 03-24-2012 06:01 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by pr_capone (Post 8488822)
Hey CC... I can't send you a PM and I can't post this link in public. Fix it so I can PM you.

We got to be friends on here. Also we can send emails through FB!

crazycoffey 03-24-2012 06:04 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by pr_capone (Post 8488824)
with the link I sent out... you basically complete your post, then send the most current link to the next person in line. That way everything gets kept on a single page and in the end a finished link can be sent out for review.

for example, bug start out his story and saves. a new link appears in the address bar, copy that he sends it to smitty. Smitty gets done and sends the updated link (the numbers change with each save) to the next person in line. on and on until we get a finished product.

Are the Noobs going to be able to find it? And is proof reading and/or drawing enough to please the judges. I thought we got points.for everyone writing

Gonzo 03-24-2012 06:20 AM

Participation is key. Not everyone needs to write, those who don't should be in charge of the illustrations.

Bugeater 03-24-2012 07:30 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lumpy (Post 8488817)
You need to check the photobucket account. The cover is done... w/ a title. LMAO

Oh...heh...I hadn't gone there yet. Seemed like a lot of work clicking on a link and logging in and all that.

Omaha 03-24-2012 10:19 AM

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Originally Posted by Bugeater (Post 8488698)
Well keep me posted on when and where you're going. I've been trying to get my ass in shape.

Will do. I'll shoot you a link to our facebook page. That's where we organize the rides.

Omaha 03-24-2012 10:20 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Pestilence (Post 8488753)
The story has been sent off to Smitty and Dartgod.

We're going to have to figure out how to send it back and forth through something other than PMs because it's to large.

Google docs?

KS Smitty 03-24-2012 10:45 AM

I'm starting on Part 3. Omaha, I'll send it to you when I'm done.

I don't understand the linky pr_ provided. :deevee:

Omaha 03-24-2012 10:56 AM

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Originally Posted by KS Smitty (Post 8489134)
I'm starting on Part 3. Omaha, I'll send it to you when I'm done.

I'll watch for it.

KS Smitty 03-24-2012 11:10 AM

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Originally Posted by Omaha (Post 8489154)
I'll watch for it.

It's been sent, along with the other 2 sections.

Omaha 03-24-2012 12:18 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by KS Smitty (Post 8489167)
It's been sent, along with the other 2 sections.

I finished it. It's a bit twisted, but I think it's pretty hilarious.I had a lot of fun writing it & I didn't get much work done....

Omaha 03-24-2012 12:30 PM

Should I post the whole thing in pr_'s link?

Buck 03-24-2012 12:34 PM

I guess let me know when it's finished so I can review it.

KS Smitty 03-24-2012 12:37 PM

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Originally Posted by Omaha (Post 8489253)
Should I post the whole thing in pr_'s link?

I think that's the plan. That way everyone can read the whole thing at once.

Omaha 03-24-2012 01:04 PM

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Originally Posted by Buck (Post 8489256)
I guess let me know when it's finished so I can review it.

Quote:

Originally Posted by KS Smitty (Post 8489262)
I think that's the plan. That way everyone can read the whole thing at once.

It's there. I love the part about the dragon eating Todd Haley. EPIC!!!!

Buck 03-24-2012 01:14 PM

One suggestion to smitty.

In the part where she wakes him up and says "We're in KC," maybe it should be "We're in Kansas City."

I don't think airline workers would ever say KC. They would say the name of the actual destination.

Omaha 03-24-2012 01:33 PM

Buck, how did you like it?

Dartgod 03-24-2012 01:35 PM

Is it finished? Can't wait to read it. I had something come up but will get started on my illustration this evening.
Posted via Mobile Device

Omaha 03-24-2012 01:49 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dartgod (Post 8489326)
Is it finished? Can't wait to read it. I had something come up but will get started on my illustration this evening.
Posted via Mobile Device

Check your PMs

The Franchise 03-24-2012 02:30 PM

Looks good so far.

Should we add some more depth to it or does everyone think it's good the way it is?

crazycoffey 03-24-2012 02:47 PM

I CANT SEE IT

KS Smitty 03-24-2012 03:35 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Buck (Post 8489298)
One suggestion to smitty.

In the part where she wakes him up and says "We're in KC," maybe it should be "We're in Kansas City."

I don't think airline workers would ever say KC. They would say the name of the actual destination.

Can do! I considered that, but was just typing away. Thanks Buck.

KS Smitty 03-24-2012 03:38 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by CrazyCoffey (Post 8489402)
I CANT SEE IT

Me either!

Buck 03-24-2012 03:52 PM

Considering the n00bs haven't done shit, I think it's fine.

I thought it was really funny.

I don't know about that part at the very end Omaha....seems like a little too much.

KS Smitty 03-24-2012 04:44 PM

OK somebody please PM me the link, I seem to be missing something.

Bugeater 03-24-2012 05:13 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Pestilence (Post 8489379)
Looks good so far.

Should we add some more depth to it or does everyone think it's good the way it is?

I haven't read it (need the link) but if I get the time I may want to work on my opening a bit so don't submit it yet.

The Franchise 03-24-2012 05:14 PM

Which brings up the question......who is submitting this thing?

Bugeater 03-24-2012 05:15 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Buck (Post 8489464)
Considering the n00bs haven't done shit,

We don't know this for sure, but another loss for them will pretty much break their backs.

Bugeater 03-24-2012 05:17 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Pestilence (Post 8489585)
Which brings up the question......who is submitting this thing?

I suppose since Buck is the one reviewing we should send any edits to him and have him submit it.

Buck 03-24-2012 05:35 PM

Sounds good to me.

KurtCobain 03-24-2012 05:53 PM

My guess is they're trying to throw this game while there is no immunity.

KS Smitty 03-24-2012 06:13 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Buck (Post 8489612)
Sounds good to me.

You already have my edit, unless there are other suggestions/corrections...

Kyle DeLexus 03-24-2012 06:47 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by KurtCobain (Post 8489633)
My guess is they're trying to throw this game while there is no immunity.

That's a hell of an idea!

Bugeater 03-24-2012 06:53 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by KurtCobain (Post 8489633)
My guess is they're trying to throw this game while there is no immunity.

What difference does that make? They'll lose a team member whether there is immunity or not.

Dartgod 03-24-2012 07:38 PM

Ok, My illustration is done. It goes with the first part written by Bugeater.

I've uploaded it to the picture sharing site. Let me know what you think.

Bugeater 03-24-2012 07:54 PM

Very nice Dart. Just saw the cover for the first time too, the n00bs don't stand a chance.

crazycoffey 03-24-2012 09:47 PM

Give me some information for another illustration! KS smitty, send my your part at least and I'll make something to go with your part. I'm working right now but will get on it ASAP in the am when I get off work. I just need a little direction. Something to write is fine too, whatever you all need/want.

Omaha 03-24-2012 09:54 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by CrazyCoffey (Post 8490023)
Give me some information for another illustration! KS smitty, send my your part at least and I'll make something to go with your part. I'm working right now but will get on it ASAP in the am when I get off work. I just need a little direction. Something to write is fine too, whatever you all need/want.

You need to draw the dragon, bro.

Dartgod 03-24-2012 09:55 PM

I still can't see the entire story. The link Omaha sent takes you to pr_capone's original test post on that site.

crazycoffey 03-24-2012 09:59 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Omaha (Post 8490027)
You need to draw the dragon, bro.

send me your part so I can read it and draw something from your section then, I bet that has the dragon in it....

Omaha 03-24-2012 10:01 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Buck (Post 8489464)
Considering the n00bs haven't done shit, I think it's fine.

I thought it was really funny.

I don't know about that part at the very end Omaha....seems like a little too much.

Haha! Let me know. I have an idea if you guys want me to change it. I like it as is....

Bugeater 03-25-2012 05:23 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dartgod (Post 8490029)
I still can't see the entire story. The link Omaha sent takes you to pr_capone's original test post on that site.

Same here, someone with the most recent link needs to send it out to everyone.

crazycoffey 03-25-2012 06:18 AM

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Originally Posted by Bugeater (Post 8490339)
Same here, someone with the most recent link needs to send it out to everyone.

uh, yeah. Like this and stuff. I'm home from work and now's the time for me to work on this....

Guess I'll just take a wild stab, or half ass it after I get even a slight ****ing clue to what the story is about when I wake up, right about the deadline time....

Bugeater 03-25-2012 06:29 AM

What we have here is...failure to communicate.

crazycoffey 03-25-2012 06:33 AM

I'll be back at about 3 or 4pm, I need the last two written submissions or at least the last one. AND/OR some PM'd suggestions that fit the story line, PLEASE....

Omaha 03-25-2012 08:33 AM

When you're on that page, you should see "omaha" on the left side. Click that and enter the password.

Bugeater 03-25-2012 08:44 AM

This is all I'm seeing over there. You need to send us the url.

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Omaha 03-25-2012 09:06 AM

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Originally Posted by Bugeater (Post 8490510)
This is all I'm seeing over there. You need to send us the url.

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Ah, that's a problem. I sent you a pm that should fix it. Is anyone else unable to read it?

Bugeater 03-25-2012 09:14 AM

Got it now. :thumb: The first link you sent me was the one that worked.

Omaha 03-25-2012 09:16 AM

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Originally Posted by Bugeater (Post 8490556)
Got it now. :thumb: The first link you sent me was the one that worked.

Cool. What do you think?

The pics look great. I love the cover!

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I have to say, I'm quite pleased with the results. There's some good stuff in there. LMAO


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