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CPVets Studios Presents:
MÉGONZ Ó TROIS
Gonzo and Lumpy have been married a long time…maybe TOO long. Now they’re tired of each other and are willing to do just about anything to spice up their marriage. Will their decisions result in marital bliss…or maybe something much more sinister? Find out all the answers in this epic adventure by CPVets Studios. http://www.xtranormal.com/watch/13273248/mgonz-o-trois http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature...&v=w2ORI6c3Bvs <iframe width="640" height="360" src="http://www.youtube.com/embed/w2ORI6c3Bvs" frameborder="0" allowfullscreen></iframe> |
FYI all:
I almost forgot to explain the scoring. Possible 100 points can be scored. Up to 50 for humor and the same for creativity. In the event of a tie, I will bring in a guest judge who will post their scores. If you made more than one video, the whole project will be scored together. |
Is it possible to embed this in the thread starter?
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kidding... it was LMAO That's exactly how I picture Gonzo and Lumpy sounding in my head. |
Somebody has got to put this on YouTube.
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Good work, guys. |
Extra points for youtube?
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You aint seen nothing yet...
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Lumpy is going to kill us all when she sees this. Thank god Pink has little chance of seeing it or we'd get killed again by her.
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Ok, I've watched it twice now and I lol'd pretty damn hard both times. Good work guys! The dragon aspect needed to be a little more subtle, maybe? The blast on Phil was just awesome. Good luck with the bannings, btw. Humor score: 45 out of 50 Let's face it, you can't be super creative when you just have two people sitting there. However, the sound effects, the pauses and the gestures were great. You guys worked everything you could into it. The credits and the time pauses were great. I also noticed there were only one or two words in the dialogue that I had to rewind on. Good work guys. Creativity score: 47 out of 50 Total score: 92 out of 100 |
Parts were funny, but the phone bit went on WAY WAY WAY too long.
I liked how creepy and ugly you made Gonzo tho, that made me laugh. |
Yeah, the phone call broke the rhythm up a bit no doubt, but that was the only way to work a 3rd person into the video.
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<p><a href="http://www.xtranormal.com/watch/13272086/threesome" target="_blank" style="font-size: 14px;font-weight:bold;">Threesome</a><br />by: <a href="http://www.xtranormal.com/profile/7988127" style="" target="_blank">soulpuppy</a></p><iframe id="xtranormal_Threesome" name="xtranormal_Threesome" style="width:480px;height:299px;" src="http://www.xtranormal.com/xtraplayr/13272086/threesome" marginwidth="0" marginheight="0" border="0" frameborder="0" scrolling="auto"></iframe> |
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you guys shoulda just let Omaha write your story. Too bad this doesn't count. |
Honestly, I think it would've worked out better if we had all written our own. When you get that many people working on the same thing you end up with something that is either too long or too ****ed up.
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We should score at least 97 on this. |
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Ok here's my take...
Humor I loved Gonzo's bald head and 'stache that made him look like a child molester. Lots of great lines... "ask her if she's into anal.... crickets... yes he's a ****ing douchbag." Laughed out loud several times. The "twist" at the end was nice with the dragon twin Lumpy leave's Gonzo for. The "credits" were funny. Nice work on the language heh. Humor score... 47 out of 50 Creativity There's only so much you can do with that forum I'm sure and things were put together nicely. The phone conversation was maybe a bit awkward with the two of them just standing there looking at each other but again... probably the best you could do. The fart was a nice touch lol. I assumed it was Gonzo that ripped it but wasn't certain so maybe one of them saying something like "you gross ****ing pig" to the other would have made that even better... especially if it was Gonzo blaming Lumpy. As I mentioned I liked the crickets. Creativity score... 43 of out 50 Total score 91 out of 100 Nicely done! |
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I think ours is clearly better.
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LOL why especially me? You pooptaco.
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Didn't you watch it? |
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It must have something to do with their "usual gay shit."
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Rub it like the log at the apollo? WTF was that?
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Humor 42/50- It did not even come close to matching the great lines in the noobs video. Could have been much raunchier or at least have some better punch lines. Best line was the "tuna can" line. Omaha's substitution video made me laugh more in a minute than the 5 minute video did, however Creativity- 46/50- More creative than the noobs. Good pauses, more easily understood. The sounds effects were great too. I like the phone call that was added in. Creative way to get another character involved. Total= 88/100 |
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Shit, we're in trouble now.
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You'd better put your teeth back in for this one! |
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