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Old 07-12-2019, 03:09 PM   #258
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Originally Posted by Third Eye View Post
I would still be careful there. The structure of the sentence is:

If you don’t trust a paper when they A, B, or C, then changes are necessary.

I added the “then” to make it a more proper if/then. Looking at it in that structure, you see why you don’t need the first comma. In my previous edit, I combined B and C into a new clause essentially saying “they attack us yet can’t even get their own shit straight”. It’s stylistic for sure. I hate a lot of commas.
If ever a username was apt...

On a different note: You and Tyreek share a disdain for commas. At least according to one media darling.
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