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Old 10-17-2006, 10:56 AM   #11
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I got it. Another nice article, Mr. GoChiefs. A little harsh on our team, but they deserve it.

I think you should get some peyote, though. To divine premises and concepts and hooks, you know? Not that this one is bad, by any means. It's clear you can write in this genre. I'd like to see you develop some really compelling and refreshing angles. You could win a prize.

Good work.

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