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Originally Posted by Bearcat
It reads like a Wikipedia article.... that's really not a criticism or compliment; I guess it depends on your intent. If your intent is to give a history and your two cents, then I'd say it's well done. If your intent is to let the world know how you feel and back it up with facts, I'd concentrate a little more on the opinion part.
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I think I went a little too far back on the history/bio. I should have just started with his coaching carrer, and then found a way to tie in the Miracle at the Meadowlands.