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Old 09-22-2009, 05:54 PM   #14
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Originally Posted by BuckinKaeding View Post
By the way, the Wording on your homepage could use some work.

This sentence here starts out as a question and then seems to turn into a run-on.

"How about a Baroque style ceiling medallion or a period wall panel design, English, French, Colonial, Country or Gothic style, including crown moldings."

I would reword the paragraph to something like this.

"How would you like a Baroque style ceiling Medallion? How about an English, French, Colonial, Country, or Gothic style period wall panel design, including crown moldings?"
Thanks. didin't realize it. It's my first attempt at a web site.
My Painter started it for me through Homestead, the wife and I are tweaking it as we go.
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