Thread: Chiefs Haley's Bowe Project Gets Tougher
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Old 11-20-2009, 06:51 AM   #14
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Originally Posted by Hydrae View Post
This is the one that I noticed in the first line:

Great editing!

Overall though it was a good article. He makes some good points and I also hope this isn't the beginning of the end for Bowe in KC.
That type of thing I can forgive because it's essentially a typo that a proofreader should have caught. But boil it down, and it's a simple mistake.

The subject/verb agreement (this instance specifically) and neither/nor-either/or shit shouldn't happen. I don't believe that's a mistake, I believe that's ignorance on Ash's part for usage, and that is inexcusable for a professional journalist.
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