Critique my article

[Jenson71]

Okay, I'm not as good as Dave Barry, but I'd like to be (for the college newspaper). With him in mind, I wrote this article:

[Jenson71]

Originally Posted by Miles

Congrats on having an article in the school paper. Way too late at night to say much in the way of constructive feedback, but with a cursory look your writing is very solid.

Thanks Miles, I appreciate that; coming from you, especially. Although, I must admit, most people that want to write for the paper here, get their articles in the paper.

[Miles]

Originally Posted by Jenson71

Thanks Miles, I appreciate that; coming from you, especially. Although, I must admit, most people that want to write for the paper here, get their articles in the paper.

Even if you think its not that hard to get them in, its still an accomplishment. For the journalism types it may be more common but for others it stands out more.