My Ode to Chiefsplanet

[Reaper16]

Originally Posted by Fire Me Boy!

There's no chorus, and no bridge. You need a chorus and a bridge. That's all verses.

I give you an "I" (for incomplete) until the chorus/bridge are put in.

We didn't write that draft board.
Don't blame us for the fury
over Aaron Curry.
We didn't write that draftboard.
True Fans love the pick they made;
bust out the grape Gatorade.

[Mr. Flopnuts]

Originally Posted by Reaper16

We didn't write that draft board.
Don't blame us for the fury
over Aaron Curry.
We didn't write that draftboard.
True Fans love the pick they made;
bust out the grape Gatorade.

Sold.