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Well ****.
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FTR, no, I'm not. I'm upstairs and he's down in his man cave. He's not the only one judging the stories, btw. We still have judging by Joey, Luv, and lewdog.
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I guess story structure played no part in the scoring.
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BOOM CH KA !!!!!!!!
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Hey Loochy, I'm hooome!
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1 nitpick / argument
How is it supposed to be told you so's? There is no possession and there is no contraction, so why would you use an apostrophe in that situation?
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Hey Loochy, I'm hooome!
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Then I respect your restraint in using your feminine wiles to seduce Gonzo (if there IS a Gonzo).
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I guess actual effort did.
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1 nitpick from me. If you google Shitbird it shows up both ways. I actually did look that one up to check, but figured if I put shit bird people would think I'm talking about a bird covered in shit and not a shitbird individual.
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Hey now...
Both stories were great. The n00bs put a little more effort into the story, though. |
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It was a tie on punctuation anyway. No bearing one way or the other with a 10 point swing. And microsoft word told me both were two words or should be hyphenated. KEEP ****ING DOUBTING BILL GATES! |
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Length does not equal effort. It's a short story FFS.
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89 ****ing points? Seriously? Their story was long and wordy and their artwork was garbage.
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