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Old 03-25-2012, 07:36 PM  
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CP Survivor Planet Game 3 Official Judging thread...
We will utilize this thread for the official story judgments.
Good job getting your submissions in on time, guys!

Scoring will go as follows:

Up to 25 Points will be assessed for each of the following:

Comedic Value
Illustrations (25 points total for all three pictures)
Spelling, punctuation.
Creativity
total available points per judge: 100

I'm re-reading them now and I will have my points submitted shortly.

Final Scores:
Gonzo:
Vets:
79
n00bs:
89

lewdog:

Vets:
86
N00bs:
91

Kurt Kobain:

Vets:
84

N00bs:
96

Luv:

Vets:
89

N00bs:
90

Congrats n00bs on an overwhelming victory. Great job!

Final combined score:

Vets:
339

n00bs:
366
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Old 03-25-2012, 08:54 PM   #16
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The **** you talking about with the commatards in the first couple paragraphs?
I have to agree. show me where there is an extra comma anywhere. I just read it over and didn't see any extra commas.
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Old 03-25-2012, 08:56 PM   #17
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Ok, I see a couple in quotations that probably shouldn't be there. Not really worth pointing out though.
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Old 03-25-2012, 08:58 PM   #18
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Commas are allowed before the word and, as it is a conjunction.
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Old 03-25-2012, 09:00 PM   #19
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Commas are allowed before the word and, as it is a conjunction.
your mom is a conjunction
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Old 03-25-2012, 09:00 PM   #20
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Either way, it seems like extreme grammar-nazi territory to me.
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Old 03-25-2012, 09:01 PM   #21
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Either way, it seems like extreme grammar-nazi territory to me.
your mom is a grammar.
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Old 03-25-2012, 09:03 PM   #22
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your mom is a grammar.
That doesn't even make sense.
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Old 03-25-2012, 09:04 PM   #23
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That doesn't even make sense.
That's cuz sofa boinks grammars for fun.
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That doesn't even make sense.
Yeah, you'll think that!
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That doesn't even make sense.
n00b humor over your head.
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shhhh!

It takes a long time to find out where he can trim points off our score to **** us.
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It takes a long time to find out where he can trim points off our score to **** us.
That's what I was thinking. Lumpy is probably hanging over his shoulder and coaching him on what kinds of things to count off for.
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Probably?

Of course she is.


If there even really IS a Gonzo.
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My evaluation of the n00bs story:

You guys really came through on this one. I am impressed at your teamwork.

Artwork:

This cover was something else. Just a great job:



However,
This pic damn near made me piss myself:



Each picture was conducive to the story but the back cover was fairly 'Meh' however, since the back cover is just a bonus, it doesn't count against you.

Total points for Artwork:
24

Creativity
You guys definitely put some real effort into this. I almost felt sorry for poor Mr. Teebow... It was a good story. You really stuck with the whole "Allah" thing throughout the story. It was fluid and definitely held my attention. It did seem to wander a little off and on with the fat whores and beastiallity but all in all a great story. I enjoyed it and it was very creative.

Total points for Creativity:
22


Spelling and Punctuation:

3 Errors as well:

I believe Crack Whore and Shit Bird are two words or can by hyphenated...
It's I told you so's, not I told you sos.

Total for punctuation and spelling:
22 Points


Comedic Value:
I have to say, pretty damn funny story, guys... Like I stated earlier, it wandered a little but as a whole, it was a great effort. I really liked how you painted the city of Denver as a whole. That warmed my heart. My favorite line?
Quote:
Tom quickly laced up his size 6 shoe, turned off his animal porn, and slapped his prize winning poodle, Princess, on the ass. "Mmm...that's what a firm pedigree ass is SUPPOSED to feel like," he thought to himself.


Great job guys, very creative and funny. I really enjoyed it.

Total Points for comedic value:
21


Total points:
89



We'll see what the other judges have to say but IMHO you guys really did well. Both teams did, actually. However, I think you guys took a few more 'Artistic Liberties' than the Vets on this one and were a little more creative.

Good job to both teams, (especially on the artwork).
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