Need some constructive criticism... - Page 4

listopencil · 06-05-2006, 11:08 PM

OK, here you go:

Someone already mentioned a misspelling, you also need a proofreader. I glanced through and noticed that you missed a space after a period-and the writing is stiff, it lacks flow. I used FireFox and it annoyed me that "Forum" opened up in a new tab instead of just going to the forum. The overall style is very simplistic. Blocks of color. Looks primitive. The lead story is about Al Wilson, I would be annoyed by that if I were a Chiefs fan. The pic under "2006 Training Camp" of the TC and preseason schedule is blurry and just links to a full size version of itself. The pic is small enough to fit on the page and it's clumsy the way you have it set up. If anything else springs to mind I'll add it later.

**penguinz** · 06-06-2006, 07:44 AM

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Originally Posted by listopencil

OK, here you go:

Someone already mentioned a misspelling, you also need a proofreader. I glanced through and noticed that you missed a space after a period-and the writing is stiff, it lacks flow.

Noted.

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I used FireFox and it annoyed me that "Forum" opened up in a new tab instead of just going to the forum.

It is not coded to do this. I have viewed it on several different browsers on both Windows and OSX and never had this happen. Has anyone else experienced this?

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The overall style is very simplistic. Blocks of color. Looks primitive.

That sort of the goal of the design. I want it to be able to load quickly and not be bogged down with lots of giant images.

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The lead story is about Al Wilson, I would be annoyed by that if I were a Chiefs fan.

I totally understand this. It was posted by someone who may help me out with the site who is also a Donkeys fan. I am also considering the possibility of going with a different domain name and making it an AFC West site instead of just a Chiefs site.

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The pic under "2006 Training Camp" of the TC and preseason schedule is blurry and just links to a full size version of itself. The pic is small enough to fit on the page and it's clumsy the way you have it set up. If anything else springs to mind I'll add it later.

I was just trying to get some content up and pulled the image from the KC Chiefs site. And no the full size image won't fit.

Thanks!

**penguinz** · 06-09-2006, 02:33 PM

Made some changes including the domain name and subject of the site. It is going to be just an all around sports site. The goal is for the forums section to be an online sports bar where people cuss and discuss sports.

BQSportsZone

Mr. Laz · 06-09-2006, 03:47 PM

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Green? This is what you should see.

i still see the background as an olive green color

IE6

**penguinz** · 06-10-2006, 08:57 PM

Can you post a screen shot?

Logical · 06-10-2006, 10:37 PM

If you don't scroll down you would think it is a new website with nothing to offer.

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