Survivor II - The Vets: Official “We Know WTF We’re Doing!“ Collaboration Thread - Page 20

**Lumpy** · 03-23-2012, 08:58 PM

There we go! Excellent ideas, Smitty!

KS Smitty · 03-23-2012, 09:01 PM

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There we go! Excellent ideas, Smitty!

Thanks! Good thing Goat quit, he's not much of a team player.

Omaha · 03-23-2012, 09:14 PM

What are the reviews? Is that just a proofread? I can do that in addition to finishing it. I used to proofread all of the letters that went out at my old firm. I'm pretty good at that. Let me know what you guys want me to do.

**Lumpy** · 03-23-2012, 09:20 PM

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What are the reviews? Is that just a proofread? I can do that in addition to finishing it. I used to proofread all of the letters that went out at my old firm. I'm pretty good at that. Let me know what you guys want me to do.

I'm all for you proofreading the damn thing. I proofread enough crap at work.

EDIT: Oh, and the review is a totally different deal. It's a synopsis.

I have it noted in the OP that you will finish the story. I also have CrazyCoffey noted as doing 1 illustration. Should it come down to the wire, and CC doesn't pull through, I'll have a back-up illustration ready to go.

Omaha · 03-23-2012, 09:25 PM

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I'm all for you proofreading the damn thing. I proofread enough crap at work.

I have it noted in the OP that you will finish the story. I also have CrazyCoffey noted as doing 1 illustration. Should it come down to the wire, and CC doesn't pull through, I'll have a back-up illustration ready to go.

I had an idea for a picture, but it was pretty much going to be the one I had in the first contest w/ Fisty wearing a #7 jersey & dreaming of Pioli instead of the fat chick. The dragon would remain the same. Let me know if we need this to happen.

**Lumpy** · 03-23-2012, 09:28 PM

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I had an idea for a picture, but it was pretty much going to be the one I had in the first contest w/ Fisty wearing a #7 jersey & dreaming of Pioli instead of the fat chick. The dragon would remain the same. Let me know if we need this to happen.

You and that damn dragon.

crazycoffey · 03-24-2012, 05:57 AM

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I'm all for you proofreading the damn thing. I proofread enough crap at work.

EDIT: Oh, and the review is a totally different deal. It's a synopsis.

I have it noted in the OP that you will finish the story. I also have CrazyCoffey noted as doing 1 illustration. Should it come down to the wire, and CC doesn't pull through, I'll have a back-up illustration ready to go.

I always come through, and all over. Im doing an illustration. Check. I can do some proof reading and writing too. Im working nights this weekend and going to bed now. Ill check back in when I wake up so have some marching orders for me!

KS Smitty · 03-23-2012, 09:24 PM

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What are the reviews? Is that just a proofread? I can do that in addition to finishing it. I used to proofread all of the letters that went out at my old firm. I'm pretty good at that. Let me know what you guys want me to do.

I was thinking more along the lines of:

"THE VETS have scored a touchdown with this fine story. Blah blah blah" ala the NY Times or whatever. You know when you buy a paperback there's all these blurbs from different reviewers on the very first page.

But yes it will need proofread too, I think we all should have our 2 cents on that.

Omaha · 03-23-2012, 10:18 PM

Bugeater, are you going to join our bikeride this summer?

**Bugeater** · 03-23-2012, 10:25 PM

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Bugeater, are you going to join our bikeride this summer?

If you're doing one that has the speed/length/terrain that I can handle. Aren't you guys hardcore road bikers?

Omaha · 03-23-2012, 10:34 PM

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If you're doing one that has the speed/length/terrain that I can handle. Aren't you guys hardcore road bikers?

No. You'll be fine. Avg 16mph all on trails. Beer & wings to follow.

**Kyle DeLexus** · 03-23-2012, 10:30 PM

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Yes I did. Wired up, installed, turns on, but no friggin' sound. Damn thing has me stumped.

did you put a CD in?

**Bugeater** · 03-23-2012, 10:32 PM

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did you put a CD in?

I wasn't aware that I needed to do that to get the radio to work.

Omaha · 03-23-2012, 10:35 PM

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did you put a CD in?

What's a CD?

**Kyle DeLexus** · 03-23-2012, 10:52 PM

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I wasn't aware that I needed to do that to get the radio to work.

did you change it from CD to radio?

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