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Third Eye · 07-12-2019, 02:28 PM

You’re right about the screenshot, but I’ve never figured out how to post images from my phone other than as an attachment, and those are annoying.

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More interested in defending TV Stations other journalists are categorizing as unethical.

Stations should be lowercase.

If you don’t trust a paper, when they publish anonymous, baseless character assassinations rather than provide a balance, when they attack their readers, when they are incompetent enough in the digital realm to make paywalls flimsier than the border at the American southwest, changes are necessary.

That is one long sentence, but I’ll allow it with a couple modifications. I’d get rid of the first comma after paper, and I’d get rid of the comma after readers and say “when they themselves aren’t competent enough...”. It makes it more clear what your clauses are.

07-12-2019, 02:28 PM	#11
Third Eye Veteran Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: JoCo Casino cash: $-1640000	You’re right about the screenshot, but I’ve never figured out how to post images from my phone other than as an attachment, and those are annoying. Last 2: More interested in defending TV Stations other journalists are categorizing as unethical. Stations should be lowercase. If you don’t trust a paper, when they publish anonymous, baseless character assassinations rather than provide a balance, when they attack their readers, when they are incompetent enough in the digital realm to make paywalls flimsier than the border at the American southwest, changes are necessary. That is one long sentence, but I’ll allow it with a couple modifications. I’d get rid of the first comma after paper, and I’d get rid of the comma after readers and say “when they themselves aren’t competent enough...”. It makes it more clear what your clauses are.
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