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Originally Posted by Molitoth

First off, the music is good and has a lot of potential. Find yourself a drummer and bassist and make it bigger!

Some easy tips to make your video better: (This is all just my opinion)

*Get the camera off yourselves and place it on something else, like a sign on the wall. When people CAN'T judge you for your clothes, mustache, hand movements, or whatever... then it FORCES them to listen to the MUSIC... and leaves open the imagination for the listener. If the listener feels so inclined to figure out what your personal appearance is, they will research it. This leaves the listener wanting more, like wanting to come and see your performance live. So start booking some gigs and save your performance for a live audience.

If you do keep yourself on camera:
*Don't read your lyrics to the camera.
*Change the video to black and white and add some vintage style distortion.
*Put the camera at somewhat of a weird angle instead of so straight on.

All very good suggestions. Since you are a long time lurker then you'll understand that we at CP are not shy about being honest with our team members. So if I may offer a few suggestions from the view of a pig farmer that spends most of his time well, ummm, doing the five knuckle shuckle with his livestock.

#1 ) Not sure if that was you singing or not but whoever it is needs to be replaced. I could understand very few words and it sounded more like a seal that was in heat.

#2) The guitar player probably needs more guitar lessons. The same chord over and over and over and over and over again.

#3) You should wear underwear. I could see your wee wee.

#4) Buy a decent pair of jeans. Did you find those in a dumpster when you were looking for some shoes.

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