It's my first attempt and my stupid PVR messed up and stopped recording before the first drive got started

I didn't notice til later. Anyway, I am going to build on it but I wanted suggestions from others who may be a bit more experienced in this area.
I took DRU's (thanks man) highlights, cut them a bit and repackaged them with a song. So simple plug, trim, compress. Obviously its just a first attempt and quality sucks from compressing compressed video but oh well.
Find it at:
www.positivepolarity.com/chiefshellsbells.avi
Anyway critique away.